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Persephone:

 

She has 3PP to spend.

 

She currently has 8PP spent on Regeneration in the following configuration:

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Regeneration 1 (Recovery Rate: Bruised 1 [1 round]) [1PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Plant Body)

 

Regeneration 12 (Recovery Rate: Bruised 2 [3, No rest], Injured 6 [No rest], Staggered 1 [20 minutes], Disabled 2 [1 hour]; Resurrection 1 [1 week]; Flaws: Source [Sunlight]; Feats: Regrowth) [7PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Cutting, Plant Body)

 

Please invest 3PP more into her Regeneration powers, raising the total spent to 11PP, and replacing that configuration with this one:

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Regeneration 7 (Recovery Rate: Bruised 3 [No rest], Injured 4 [1 round]) [7PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Plant Body)

 

Regeneration 6 (Recovery Rate: Injured 2 [6, No rest], Staggered 1 [20 minutes], Disabled 2 [1 hour]; Resurrection 1 [1 week]; Flaws: Source [Sunlight]; Feats: Regrowth) [4PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Cutting, Plant Body)

 

For no change in cost, please change the flaw on her Impervious Toughness power from Ablative to Unreliable, making it look like this:

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Impervious Toughness 10 (Extras: Force Field [Free Action, Sustained Duration]; Flaws: Unreliable [5 uses]) [5PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Bark Armor, Plant Body, Shapeshifting)

 

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Octoman:

 

2PP to spend.

 

Please invest 2PP more into his Regeneration power, changing it to the following:

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Regeneration 3 (Recovery 1 [+9]; Recovery Rate: Disabled 2 [1 hour]; Feats: Regrowth) [4PP] (Descriptors: Mutation)

 

Formatting:

A couple of lines on the sheet have a black background I accidentally caused by copy/pasting text while using a dark mode browser filter. Please replace them with these clean versions:

His Notice skill:

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Notice 5 (+15/+5)Skill Mastery, Deafened

And his Skill Mastery feat:

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Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Bluff, Computers, Notice)

 

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Mister Strix:

 

3PP to spend.

 

Please invest 1PP more into his Healing effect for the "Total" extra, reconfiguring it as follows:

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Healing 1 (Extras: Action 4 [Reaction], Affects Objects, Total; Flaws: Limited [Objects], Personal, Source [Blood]) [5PP] (Descriptors: Regeneration)

 

Please invest 2PP more into his second Regeneration effect, reconfiguring it as follows:

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Regeneration 22 (Recovery Rate: Injured 6 [No rest], Disabled 8 [No rest], Resurrection 8 [1 round]; Flaws: Limited [Vampire Weaknesses inflict Incurable damage; Requires outside aid to Resurrect if decapitated, staked through the heart, incinerated, dissolved, or disintegrated]) [11PP]

 

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Facsimile

 

2 points to spend

 

Looking to add Acute and Analytical to the information absorbtion super sense 1pp each. 

 

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Infinity  17 PP Available

 

Complications

Add:  I made a lot of special modifications myself:  Modified jump drive alt power only functions when piloting the Star Hopper with its custom jump drive in any other vehicle Fa'Rua can't take full advantage of her spacial warp abilities.

 

Feats [5PP]

1 Rank Sidekick (to 32 ranks)

4 ranks equipment 

Add Damage 10 (Laser Cannons; Extras:  Ranged) [20EP] to Star Hopper

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Equipment: 12PP = 60EP

Star Hopper[40EP]

  • Size: Colossal{4EP}
  • Str: 60 {2EP}
  • Toughness 18 {5EP}
  • Defense 2
  • Space Travel 1 [2 with modified Jump Drive] {1EP}
  • Flight 10(10,000MPH) [17 (2,500,000 MPH) with Modified Jump Drive] {20EP}
  • Damage 10 (Laser Cannons; Extras:  Ranged) {20EP}
  • Computer {1EP}
  • Nav System {1EP}
  • Communications {1EP}
  • Living Space {1EP}
  • Defense System {1EP}
  • Infirmary {1EP}
  • Long Range Sensors {1EP}
  • Enhanced Sensors {1EP}
  • Teleport 20 (Jump Drive; Extras: Accurate; Flaws; Long distance only; Power Feats:  Easy, Progression 9 [100 Tons]) {From Modified Jump Drive AP}

 

Powers [12PP]

Upgrade Teleport 12PP (new Total Cost 17PP)

Remove short range only Flaw 4PP

Add Accurate Extra 4PP

Add Easy, Change Direction, Change Velocity, and Turnabout Feats 4PP

Alternate power update:

Rename the IC name to Modified Jump Drive

+ 12 Ranks Enhanced feats

  • 6 Ranks Equipment ( to Equipment 13 ) spend 20 EP to remove Limited: Deep Space Only from teleport power;  spend 10 EP to Add Easy and 9 ranks of progression [100 tons] (New cost 50EP)
  • 3 Ranks Equipment (to Equipment 16) Add Flight 7  and Space Travel 1 to Star Hopper
  • 1 rank Second Chance: Piloting checks
  • 2 ranks Improved Simultaneous Task
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Teleport 4 (Space Fold; 400' or 1 Mile; Extras: Accurate; Feats: Alternate Power, Change Direction, Change Velocity, Easy, Turnabout) [17PP] (Psychic, Lor, Cosmic)

  • Alternate PowerEnhanced Feats 16 (Modified Jump Drive;
    • Equipment 10 {50EP}; Add to Star Hopper: Teleport 20 (Jump Drive; Extras: Accurate; Flaws; Long distance only; Power Feats:  Easy, Progression 9 [100 Tons]){50EP}
    • Equipment 3 {15EP}; Add to Star Hopper: Flight 7(Spatial Warp) {14EP} and Space Travel 1 {1EP}
    • Improved Simultaneous Task 2
    • Second Chance (Pilot Checks) ) {16AP}

 

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Eternity  

Extra rank of sidekick in Infinities edit brings his PP total to 160PP for 5 Free PP

 

Skills: 1PP

Add Knowledge: Civics 2 (+5)

Add Language 1 (English)

Add Pilot 1 (+1) 

 

Feats: 4PP

Equipment 1 (5EP)

  • Universal Translator (Comprehend Language 2 [understand all, speak one at a time]) {4EP}
  • Emergency Vac Suit {1EP}

Teamwork 3

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Empyrean  

20PP available

 

Powers:

Add 2 Ranks to Flight (To Flight 5 [250MPH]) 4PP

Add Insubstantial 3 (Cosmic Energy Body; Extras: +0 Native insubstantial; Feats: Innate) [16PP]

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Justice

9PP available

 

Saves: 2PP

Will Save +2

 

Feats: 3PP

Add Luck 3

 

Powers: 4PP

Increase the rank of the Justice Armor device by 1, to rank 14, costing 4PP

 

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The Justice Armor should now be a 70PP container. Currently 5PP available.

Gonna move some things around in the Justice Armor device.

 

Getting rid of the I.D.E.A. Systems power as an array, freeing up 11PP, for a total of 16PP available in the armor. Replacing it with the following container:

 

I.D.E.A. System 4 (15PP Container) [15PP]

Super-Movement 1 ("Z-Space Portal"; Options: Dimensional Movement [To and From Z-Space]; Extras: Portal (+2), Feats: Progression [Portal Size] 3) (Up to 50ft x 50ft portal) [7PP] (Dimensional, Magic, Z-Space)

Super-Senses 8 (Options: Counter Visual Concealment, Counters Visual Obscure, Uncanny Dodge [Visual]) [8PP] (H.U.D., Computer Analysis, Combat Subroutines)

 

Getting rid of the Enhanced Strength power in the R.I.D.E.R. System, using the 4PP from that to increase the Z-Space Arsenal array to rank 10.

That leaves me with 1PP to spend, which I use to add another Alternate Power to the Z-Space Arsenal, adding an Obscure effect. On top of that, I'll also rename the Power Sword to Justice Strike. Same effect, different descriptors.

 

All in all, the entire Justice Armor device should now look like this, please mind the indents when pasting it

 

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Device 14 ("Justice Armor"; 70PP Container; Flaws: Hard-To-Lose; Feats: Restricted 2 [Only you can use];) [58PP] (Invention, Technology)

I.D.E.A. System 4 (15PP Container) [15PP]

Super-Movement 1 ("Z-Space Portal"; Options: Dimensional Movement [To and From Z-Space]; Extras: Portal (+2), Feats: Progression [Portal Size] 3) (Up to 50ft x 50ft portal) [7PP] (Dimensional, Magic, Z-Space)

Super-Senses 8 (Options: Counter Visual Concealment, Counters Visual Obscure, Uncanny Dodge [Visual]) [8PP] (H.U.D., Computer Analysis, Combat Subroutines)

 

M.O.D. System 5 (10PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 1, Dynamic Alternate Power 2) [13PP] 

DBP: Protection 0-10 (Total Toughness +5 to +15) {0-10PP} 

DAP: Enhanced Feats 0-10 (Dodge Focus 0-10; Total Defense +5 to +15) {0-10PP} 

 

M.O.V.E. System 2.5 (5PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 2) [7PP]

BPLeaping 3 ("Jump Jets") (Leap distance x10: Running 120 ft.) [3PP] + Super-Strength 1 (+5 Effective Strength, heavy load: 600 lbs.) [2PP] {5/5PP} (Rockets)

AP: Speed 3 ("Boost Jets") (50 mph, 440 ft./rnd) [3PP] + Super-Strength 1 (+5 Effective Strength, heavy load: 600 lbs.) [2PP] {5/5PP} (Rockets)

APImpervious Toughness 5 ("Armor Plating"{5/5PP} (Armor)

 

R.I.D.E.R. System 2.4 (12PP Container) [12PP]

Enhanced Feat 1 (Quick Change[1PP] (Collapsible Armor)

Enhanced Trait 4 (Attack Bonus+2) [4PP] (Combat Subroutines)

Enhanced Trait 2 (Defense Bonus+1) [2PP] (Combat Subroutines)

Enhanced Trait 3 (Reflex Save +2) [2PP] (Combat Subroutines)

Features 2 (Built-in Subtle Computer[2PP] (Computer, A.I. System)

Protection 1 [1PP] (Armor)

 

Z-Space Arsenal 10 (20PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 3) [23PP] 

BP: [16 + 4 = 20PP]

Damage 6 ("Justice Strike"; Extras: Penetrating 5; Feats: Accurate 2, Improved Critical 2, Mighty[16PP](Kicks, Punches, Enhanced Musculature, Motors, Bludgeoning Damage Type
Enhanced Strength 4 [4PP] (Enhanced Musculature)

APBlast 6 ("Shock Blaster"; Extras: Penetrating 1; Feats: Accurate 4, Indirect 3) {20/20PP} (Blaster, Pellet, Electricity, Z-Space Portals)

AP: [16 + 4 = 20PP]

Damage 8 ("Rocket Hammer"; Feats: Accurate, Extended Reach, Knockback 5, Mighty) [16PP] (Hammer, Bludgeoning Damage Type)

Enhanced Strength 4 [4PP] (Enhanced Musculature)

APObscure 8 ("Smoke Grenade"; Options: Visual Obscure; Extras: Independent (+0); Feats: Indirect 3(1000 ft. area radius) {19/20PP} (Grenade, Smoke, Z-Space Portals) 

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Please exchange the current sample powers for the Gadgets power for these, some minor fixes and getting rid of weird backgrounds

 

Grappling Gun: Speed 1 (Extras: Linked) + Super Movement 2 (Options: Slow Fall, Swinging; Extras: Linked) {5/5PP}
Electro-Static Pads: Super Movement 2 (Wall-Crawling 2) {4/5PP}
Gas Mask w. Air Supply: Immunity 2 (Gas Descriptor) [2PP] + Immunity 2 (Suffocation Effects; Flaws: Limited [1 hour air supply]) [1PP] {3/5PP}
Full Spectrum Goggles: Super Senses 5 (Infravision, Ultravision, Analytical Full Vision, Microscopic Vision 1 [dust-sized]) {5/5PP}
First Aid Kit: Enhanced Trait 1 (Medicine +4) {1/5PP}
Gadgeteer's Tools: Enhanced Trait 2 (Craft [Electronics] +4, Craft [Mechanical] +4) {2/5PP}
Hacker's Toolkit: Enhanced Trait 1 (Computers +4) {1/5PP}

 

Please update the Power Sword entry in the trade-off to be called Justice Strike.

 

Updated DC Block:

 

DC Block

Name

Range

Save

Effect

Attack Bonus

Unarmed

Touch

DC17 TOU (staged)

Damage

+4

Unarmed – Justice Armor 

Touch

DC19 TOU (staged)

Damage

+6

Justice Strike

Touch

DC25 TOU (staged)

Damage

+10, Crit 18-20, Penetrating 5

Shock Blaster

60 ft.

DC21 TOU (staged)

Damage

+14, Penetrating 1, Indirect 3

Rocket Hammer

5 ft.

DC27 TOU (staged)

Damage

+8, Knockback 4

 

An updated Power Descriptions, reflecting the changes in this update:

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Power Descriptions:

Robin posses no innate powers. All her abilities come from gymnastic skills or technology she created herself. After several different battle suit iterations and design philosophies, including her prototype suit and using a number of different armors for different situations, Robin has finally settled on a modular armor design, using her grandmother's amulet, now incorporated directly in the new and improved Justice Driver belt. The amulet is a large light purple, almost pink, round stone, normally hanging from a necklace. Unknown to Robin, her grandmother had used the amulet's ability to access Z-Space as the 70'es super hero Miss Step. Unaware of the amulet being magic, rather than just a great source of energy and a way to reach Z-Space, Robin continues to use it as her power source.

 

The newest iteration of the Justice Driver belt houses both an utility belt, able to access a multitude of Robin's inventions, and access to the Justice Armor. By activating the Justice Driver through inserting her grandmother's amulet, and using the keyword "Henshin", Robin expands the under armor from the Justice Driver belt, while simultaneously summoning the rest of the armor. While the armor's actual appearance seems more or less unchanged since the last iteration, everything underneath, both hardware and software, has been changed greatly, utilizing 4 systems that Robin has created. Together, they utilize the power source in the amulet in a fine balance, driving precisely the amount of power needed for each task.

 

The principal system used by the armor is the Rapid Intervention Defense and Emergency Response (R.I.D.E.R.) system . The R.I.D.E.R. system provides base enhancement to the wearer's physical strength, while offering protection and computer assistance to the wearer's reflexes and combat skills.

 

The Modular Output Defense system (M.O.D.) , was designed to offer variable speed and protection in combat. By rapidly altering the armor plating on the suit, the wearer can quickly switch between slow, but heavily protected armor, or fast, but not quite as formidable armor, or anything in between, adapting to fit the situation as needed. While the process is quick, it is possible to interrupt it during combat, which leads to Robin prefering an armor setting for the M.O.D. system as combat starts.

 

To improve her mobility in combat, Robin designed the Multivariable Outrageous Virtous Extension (M.O.V.E.) system. By using rocket boosters housed in the boots, Robin can either propel herself forward in great leaps or move at incredible speeds for brief periods of time. The system also enhances the wearer's carry weight, due to the various support structures needed in the armor to make sure the rocket boosters caused her no harm. Alternatively, by diverting energy from the rocket boosters, Robin can attach heavier, bullet proof armor.

 

Whereas the other systems are rather rigid in their design and utility, the Interactive Dynamic Expansion Application system (I.D.E.A.) contain a great number of different gadgets and tools that Robin developed for the armor, connected by using the same power source from the armor. While the list of tools in the I.D.E.A. system is ever expanding, it so far contains enhanced visual options and, allows Robin to use her grandmother's amulet to create portals to Z-Space, allowing her access to the AnneX, or to summon different armors parts and weapons.

 

Finally, Robin has begun using what she has dubbed her Z-Space Arsenal. By rapidly creating portals to the AnneX in Z-Space, Robin is able to swiftly exchange the weapons she need during a battle. While she has a number of plans for how to expand her arsenal, it currently includes the Shock Blaster, a one-handed gun that fires small bullets that give off a powerful electric shock on impact, the Rocket Hammer, a two-handed battle hammer that further enhances the force of its blows with quick bursts of the jet booster attached to it and Smoke Grenades, which releases a thick, obscuring smoke when activated. Both the Shock Blaster and Smoke Grenades can be tossed through Z-Space Portals to arrive from any position near their target. Outside of the external arsenal, she retains her signature Justice Strikes, where she redirects power from the armor into powerful motors in her legs or arms, allowing her to strike with incredible force.

 

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And finally, please update the last paragraph in the History to this, taking care of a missing word.

 

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Since then, Robin has faced gangs of thieves, monsters, super natural threats and much more. She has been gifted her grandmother's amulet, that she once used as the super hero Miss Step, allowing her to access Z-Space, where she has established headquarters in an abandoned structure, though not going unnoticed by other inhabitants. She has worked through multiple iterations of her armor, finally settling on a modular design. And just in time, as faces Emerald City brand new threats.

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Archer II

 

Please increase Archer's Luck feat to Luck 3, leaving him with 2 unspent PP.

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Cheval

 

Please increase Cheval's Luck feat to Luck 4, spending 3PP and leaving him with 3 unspent PP.

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Dead Head

 

He's got 13 points unspent!  He's also maxed out.  So let's see what his Final Form shall be.

 

First, though, please edit my Reward Tracker to show that he is a Titanium character.

 

Skills  +1pp

+4 ranks of Diplomacy, bringing it to 12 (+15)

 

Feats  +3pp

Favored Environment (cemeteries/graveyards)

Luck 2 (bringing this up to Luck 3)

 

Powers  +9pp

Necromancy Array: 2 new Alternate Powers  [+2pp]

AP: Communication 3 (“haunt hotline,” mental, 1,000 feet; Extras: Area; Flaw: Limited [Only with Undead and Characters with Comprehend/Spirits]; PFs: Dimensional 2 [afterlives], Selective, Subtle) {7} plus Mind Reading 10 (memento mors”; Extras: Action 2 [Free for surface, Move for probe], Sensory Link; Flaws: Limited [only memories & thoughts pertaining to death & killing], Range 2 [Touch]) {10}  {7+10=17/17}

AP: Nullify 11 (“curse eating”; all magic effects simultaneously; Extra: Duration [Concentration]; Flaws: Limited [to necromantic magic effects], Range [Touch]; PF: Selective)  {12/17}

 

Super-Senses +7 (Danger Sense [mental], “Spiritual Blindsight” [Mental Sense; Enhancements: Accurate, Acute, Radius, Ranged]) [+7pp]

 

With one of those powers comes a new Complication:

 

Blind Without 'Em: Dead Head's "spiritual blindsight" is a necromantic variation of the traditional psychic blindsight, with a few limits. It allows him to sense the living, the dead, and the undead: anything that has or once had a soul (for varying definitions of "soul"). As such, it does not work on mindless robots (and similar constructs), nor does it pick up on nonliving objects (like buildings and vehicles).

 

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Dirge:

 

4PP to spend.

 

Please increase his Strength by +4, from 18 (+4) to 22 (+6).

This will change the "Heavy Load" listed next to his Strength score from "300 lbs." to "520 lbs.".

This will also change his Grapple bonus and his Climb and Swim skill bonuses.

 

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Horrorshow

 

7 pp free.  And he's got enough now that he could be PL 12 (he's PL 11 now).  But I'm not going there.  Instead, I'm going backwards, lowering him to PL 10!  And giving him some much-needed skills.

 

Abilities  [-2pp]

Reduce Intelligence to 12/+1  [-2pp].  I've got plenty of brainy characters, let's have this one be a bit different.

 

Combat [-6pp]

Reduce Base (non-Enhanced) Attack Bonus from +3 to +2. [-2pp]

Reduce Base Defense Bonus from +4 to +2.  [-4pp]

 

Combat Block would now be as follows

COMBAT: 4 + 4 = 8PP

Initiative: +3

Attack: +10 Melee, +4 Ranged (+4/+2 Base, Attack Focus [Melee] +6/+3)

Grapple: +18, +15 if Morphed

Defense: +8 (+2 Base, +6/+4 Dodge Focus), +1 Flat-Footed

Knockback: -11 vs. Physical, -6 vs. Energy as “Chitinous Horror”; -6 if Morphed or in "Oozey" form

 

Saving Throws  [---]

Please note that his Impervious Toughness when in Chitinous Horror form is only effective vs. Physical attacks.

 

Skills [+10pp]

+40 ranks in skills: +5r in Bluff, +3r in Concentration, +7r in Gather Information, +5r in Intimidate (and I'm getting rid of his Enhanced Skills), +4r in Knowledge/Life Science, +1r in Knowledge/Pop Culture, +5r in Notice, +1r in Perform/Acting, +7r in Sense Motive, and +2r in Stealth.  [+10pp]

 

Skills Block would now be as follows

SKILLS: 72R = 18PP

Bluff 7 (+10; +10 more to imitate sounds when Shapechanged)

Concentration 7 (+10)

Disguise 7 (+10; +30 more w/ Morph, +15 more w/ Shapeshift)

Gather Information 7 (+10)

Intimidate 7 (+10)

Language 2 (English, Russian, Ukrainian [native])

Knowledge (Life Science) 4 (+5)

Knowledge (Popular Culture) 9 (+10)

Notice 7 (+10)

Perform (Acting) 1 (+4; +10 more to imitate sounds when Shapechanged)

Sense Motive 7 (+10)

Stealth 7 (+10)

 

Feats  [-1pp]

Remove 1 rank of Attack Focus (Melee).  [-1pp]

 

Under "Fluid Fighter," change

Attack Focus (Melee) 3 (To 7 total)

to

Attack Focus (Melee) 3 (to 6 total)

 

Powers [-1pp]

Remove Enhanced Skills 4 (horrific transformation; Intimidate +4).  [-1pp]

 

Totals

Abilities (26) + Combat (8) + Saving Throws (10) + Skills (18) + Feats (11) + Powers (100) - Drawbacks (3) = 170/177 Power Points [7 free]

 

Power Level: 10/12 (170/177 PP)

Unspent Power Points: 7

Trade-Offs: -2 Defense/+2 Toughness

 

Miscellaneous Notes

Remove the "As he is now" line, and replace it with this:

 

Combat By Form

  • Chitinous Horror Form: Melee +10 (Grapple +18), Strikes +10, Defense +8 (+1 flat-footed), Toughness +12 (Knockback -11 vs. Physical, -6 vs. Energy).  [PL 10 offense, PL 10 defense]

  • Oozey Form: Melee +10 (Grapple +18), Strikes +10, Defense +8 (+1 flat-footed), Toughness +12 (Knockback -6).  [PL 10 offense, PL 10 defense]

  • When Morphed: Melee +10 (Grapple +15), Unarmed Strike +5, Defense +8 (+1 flat-footed), Toughness +12 (Knockback -6).  [PL 8 offense, PL 10 defense]

  • When powerless: Melee +5 (Grapple +6), Unarmed Strike +1, Defense +6 (+1 flat-footed), Toughness +2 (Knockback -1).  [PL 3 offense, PL 4 defense]

 

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Angelic
 

Change 


Benefit (Wealth) 

 

to 


Benefit (Fame) 

 

Give her the Complication: 

 

"Little Niece": Eira grew up in the shadow of the superheroic community - and now everybody knows her! Scientists and engineers recognize Miss Americana and Dragonfly's perky little assistant, hobgoblins and frost giants recognize Kimber Storm's little niece with all the questions, Praetorians and Lor recognize Citizen's little sister with the big smile (my how you've changed, etc), and so on, and so on, and so on. It has its advantages but it also means that everyone's watching - or it feels that way, anyway! 

 

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MASQUE

What? Fox submitting edits? Unpossible.

 

19 unspent points on Masque.

 

Fluff

Please increase Elizabeth's age to 17.

 

Skills (-3 free points)

Please add:

3 ranks of Bluff [ Bluff 11 (+14, +18 Attractive)SM ]

2 ranks of Concentration [ Concentration 10 (+10) ]

2 ranks of Notice [ Notice 10 (+10) ]

2 ranks of Sense Motive [ Sense Motive 10 (+10) ]

3 ranks of Sleight of Hand [ Sleight of Hand 15 (+18)SM ]

 

Feats (-3 free points)

Please add the following feats:

Improved Initiative (this will increase her Initiative bonus from +3 to +7)

Fast Task [Trick]

Redirect

 

Powers (-4pp -9pp = -13 free points)

The following is a new power:

Comprehend 2 (Speak Any, Understand Any) [4pp] (liar's tongue)

 

The array's getting a boost and some updates, largely simple (increasing budget, collapsing blast and dazzle into a single power, boosting concealment, boosting illusion, boosting duplication and adding +survival). It should now read as follows:

Trickster Array 22 (44PP array; Feats: Alternate Power 3) [47PP]

  • Blast 8 (Extras: Linked [Dazzle]; Feats: Accurate 3, Homing) + Dazzle 8 (visual; Extras: Linked [Blast]) [20+16= 36/44] (will-o'-wisp)
  • Concealment 10 (all sense types; Feats: Close Range, Selective), Morph 10 (any humanoid [2], +50 disguise) [22 + 20 = 42/44]
  • Illusion 10 (all sense types [4]; Feats: Progression 4 [100' radius]) [44/44]
  • Duplication 11 (155/165PP clone; Feats: Mental Link; Extras: Heroic, Survival; Drawback: duplicate inherits conditions) [44/44]

A note on the Duplication, since it's always a bear - your Duplication's budget is (Rank x 15)pp, and you have to have enough ranks to cover (your pp - Duplication's cost). In this case, the sheet's 199pp; that minus 44 for the duplication is 155, which needs at least 11 ranks of Duplication (total budget: 165) to cover costs. Math is fun.

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Sagrado Corazon

15 PP available

 

 

Feats: 6PP 9PP remain

Connected

Evasion (up to Evasion 2)

Luck 1 (up to luck 3) 

improved defense 2

Improved Initiative

 

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Octoman:

 

2PP to spend.

 

Please invest another 2PP in his Regeneration power.

 

Please copy and paste the following onto his sheet, replacing the current version:

 

Regeneration 5 (Recovery 1 [+9]; Recovery Rate: Injured 2 [5 minutes], Disabled 2 [1 hour]; Feats: Regrowth) [6PP] (Descriptors: Mutation)

 

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Persephone:

 

1PP to spend.

 

Please invest another 1PP into her Regeneration powers.

 

Please copy and paste the following, replacing both effects:

 

Regeneration 9 (Recovery Rate: Bruised 3 [No rest], Injured 6 [No rest]) [9PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Plant Body)

 

Regeneration 4 (Recovery Rate: Staggered 1 [20 minutes], Disabled 2 [1 hour], Resurrection 1 [1 week]; Flaws: Source [Sunlight]; Feats: Regrowth) [3PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Cutting, Plant Body)

 

Please add the Action extra and Range flaw to her Environment Control (Light) effect.

Please copy/paste the following version in the place of the current one:

 

Environment Control 1 (Light [Level 1]; Area: 5ft radius; Extras: Action [Move]; Flaws: Range [Touch]) [1PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Bioluminescence, Plant Body, Shapeshifting)

 

Please add the Action flaw to her Morph effect, freeing up 1PP.

Please copy/paste the following version in the place of the current one:

 

Morph 1 (Broad Group [Humanoids]; Extras: Duration [Continuous]; Flaws: Action [Move], Limited [Plant-People]) [1PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Plant Body, Shapeshifting)

 

Please use that 1PP to purchase the Contacts feat.

Please make sure to add "Contacts" in superscript next to the Gather Information skill bonus.

 

Please add the Feedback flaw to the Create Object and Snare APs in her Plant Control array.

Please copy/paste the following versions in the place of the existing ones:

 

Alternate Power: [30PP] (Additional Descriptors: Animate Plants, Plant Growth)

Create Object 10 (Range: 1,000ft; Volume: 10 cubes; Toughness: 10; Lifting Strength: 50, Heavy Load: 12 tons; Extras: Duration [Continuous]; Flaws: Feedback; Feats: Indirect 3, Progression [Size] 4 [100ft cubes], Selective, Stationary, Subtle) [30PP]

 

Alternate Power: [19 + 11 = 30PP] (Additional Descriptors: Animate Plants, Grasping Branches/Roots/Vines)

Snare 10 (Range: 10 100ft Increments, 1,000ft Max; Extras: Linked [Trip]; Flaws: Feedback; Feats: Accurate 3 [+6 Attack], Improved Critical [19-20], Indirect 3, Reversible, Subtle) [19PP]

Trip 10 (Range: 10 100ft Increments, 1,000ft Max; Extras: Linked [Snare]; Feats: Improved Throw) [11PP]

 

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Dirge:

 

1PP to spend.

 

Please change tradeoffs as follows:

 

Tradeoffs: -5 Attack / +5 Damage, -5 Defense / +5 Toughness

 

Changes:

Spoiler

-1 Base Attack

-1 Base Defense

-1 Reflex

+4 Intimidation

+3 Luck

+3 Electromagnetic Control array

+0.5 Electromagnetic Movement array

+1 Force Field

Dropped Limited Impervious Toughness

Dropped Direction Sense

Please copy/paste the following to replace the bottom half of his sheet:

 

 

ABILITIES 8 + 0 + 14 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 22PP

Strength: 22 (+6) (Heavy Load: 520 lbs.)

Dexterity: 10 (+0)

Constitution: 26 (+8)

Intelligence: 10 (+0)

Wisdom: 10 (+0)

Charisma: 10 (+0)

 

 

COMBAT 10 + 10 = 20PP

Initiative: +0 (+0 Dex)

Attack: +5

Grapple: +11 (+5 Melee Attack, +6 Str)

Defense: +5, +3 Flat-Footed

Knockback Resistance: 7/4

 

 

SAVING THROWS 0 + 5 + 8 = 13PP

Toughness: +15/+8 (+8 Con, +7 Force Field)

Fortitude: +8 (+8 Con, +0PP)

Reflex: +5 (+0 Dex, +5PP)

Will: +8 (+0 Wis, +8PP)

 

 

SKILLS 28R = 7PP

Climb 0 (+4)

Concentration 5 (+5)

Intimidation 4 (+4)

Knowledge (Galactic Lore) 4 (+4)

Knowledge (Physical Sciences) 4 (+4)

Knowledge (Technology) 4 (+4)

Languages 3 (Galstandard, Fryxian [Native], Lor, Zultasian)

Perform (Oratory) 4 (+4)

Swim 0 (+4)

 

 

FEATS 5PP

Fearless

Interpose

Luck 3

 

 

POWERS 90PP


Device 3 (15PP Container [Passive, Permanent]; Flaws: Hard-To-Lose) [12PP] (Descriptors: Environmental Force Field Projector, Technology)

 

Environment Control 1 (Light [Level 1]; Area: 5ft radius; Extras: Action [Move], Duration [Continuous], Linked [Features, Immunity]; Flaws: Range [Touch]) [2PP] (Descriptors: Environmental Force Field, Technology)

Features 4 (Environmental Adaptation 4 [High-Gravity, Low-Gravity, Underwater, Zero-Gravity]; Extras: Linked [Environment Control, Immunity]) [4PP]

Immunity 9 (Life Support; Extras: Duration [Continuous], Linked [Environment Control, Features]; Flaws: Action [Move]) [9PP]

 

Electromagnetic Control 20 (40PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 4) [44PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Electromagnetism)

 

Base Power: [40PP] (Additional Descriptors: Magnetokinesis)

Move Object 15 (Lifting Strength: 75, Heavy Load: 400 tons; Extras: Damaging [10 ranks], Range [Perception]; Flaws: Limited [Metal]) [40PP]

 

Alternate Power: [40PP] (Additional Descriptors: Magnetokinesis, "Maximum Effort")

Move Object 70 (Lifting Strength: 350, Heavy Load: 1.024 billion tons; Extras: Damaging [10 ranks], Range [Perception]; Flaws: Action [Full], Distracting, Limited [Metal]) [40PP]

 

Alternate Power: [39PP] (Additional Descriptors: Lightning Bolts, or Metal Projectiles and "Human Railgun")

Blast 15 (Feats: Improved Range 4 [1 3,750ft Range Increment], Indirect 3, Progression [Max Range] 1 [3,750ft], Variable Descriptor [Energy and Electrical, or Physical and either Bludgeoning, Piercing, or Slashing]) [39PP]

 

Alternate Power: [39PP] (Additional Descriptors: Magnetically-Reinforced Metal Bonds)

Snare 15 (Feats: Improved Range 4 [1 3,750ft Range Increment], Indirect 3, Progression [Max Range] 1 [3,750ft], Reversible) [39PP]

 

Alternate Power: [40PP] (Additional Descriptors: Shape Metal)

Transform 10 (Metal; Mass: 1,000 lbs.; Extras: Duration [Continuous, Lasting], Range [Perception]; Flaws: Action [Full], Distracting) [40PP]

 

Electromagnetic Movement 2.5 (5PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power) [6PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Electromagnetic Control)

 

Base Power: [5PP]

Flight 5 (250MPH, 2,500ft [1/2 mile] per Move Action; Flaws: Platform) [5PP]

 

Alternate Power: [5PP]

Super-Movement 5 (Permeate 3 [Full Speed]; Wall-Crawling 2 [Full Speed; Not flat-footed]; Flaws: Limited [Metal]) [5PP]

 

Force Field 7 (Extras: Linked [Immunity]) [7PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Electromagnetic Control, Personal Magnetic Energy Field)

Immunity 10 (Metal effects; Extras: Force Field [Free Action, Sustained Duration], Linked [Force Field]; Flaws: Limited [1/2 Effect]) [5PP]

 

Fryxian Biology 2 (10PP Container [Passive, Permanent]; Feats: Innate) [11PP] (Descriptors: Alien Biology)

 

Damage 2 (Feats: Mighty) [3PP] (Additional Descriptors: Head Butt, Horns)

 

Features 1 (Insulating Fur) [1PP]

 

Growth 2 (+4 Strength, +2 Constitution; Extras: Duration [Continuous]; Flaws: Permanent) [6PP]

 

Super-Senses 5 (Electromagnetic Awareness [Electricity, Magnetism, and Metal]; Descriptor Frequency: Very Common; Sense Type: Radio, Default: Acute, Radius, Ranged; Extras: Accurate) [5PP] (Descriptors: Alien, Electromagnetic Sense)

 

 

ATTACK                      RANGE                 SAVING THROW              EFFECT

Unarmed                     Touch                 DC21 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Physical)

Horns                       Touch                 DC23 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Physical)

Blast (Lightning Bolt)      Ranged (3,750ft Max)  DC30 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Energy*)

Blast (Metal Projectiles)   Ranged (3,750ft Max)  DC30 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Physical*)

Magnetokinesis              Perception            Grapple vs +30 (Staged)   Pinned/Bound**

                            Perception            DC25 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Energy)**

 Thrown Object              Throwing (Str 75)     DC30 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Physical)

 Maximum Effort             Perception            Grapple vs +140 (Staged)  Pinned/Bound**

                            Perception            DC25 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Energy)**

 Thrown Object, Max Effort  Throwing (Str 350)    DC30 Toughness (Staged)   Damage (Physical)

Shape Metal                 Perception            DC20 Fortitude            Transformed

Snare                       Ranged (3,750ft Max)  DC25 Reflex (Staged)      Entangled/Bound

 

*Variable Descriptor.

**Only affects Metal targets.

 

 

Abilities (22) + Combat (20) + Saving Throws (13) + Skills (7) + Feats (5) + Powers (90) - Drawbacks (0) = 157/157 Power Points

 

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UPGRADED by Fox

 

Artificer

 

9 PP to spend

 

COMBAT [+2pp]

Increase Base Attack Bonus by +1.

 

Attack: +4 Melee, +7 Ranged, +11 w/ Blast

 

 

SAVING THROWS [0]

Cost is listed incorrectly: should be [2 + 2 + 3 = 7PP]

Cost is correct in the Totals row at the bottom of the sheet.

 

 

SKILLS [+12r = +3pp]

Concentration +1r

Craft (Chemical) +2r

Investigate +2r

Medicine +2r

Search +5r

 

Concentration 5 (+8)

Craft (Artistic) 7 (+10)

Craft (Chemical) 2 (+5)

Craft (Mechanical) 7 (+10)

Craft (Structural) 7 (+10)

Disable Device 7 (+10)

Investigate 2 (+5)

Knowledge (Arcane Lore) 7 (+10)

Knowledge (Technology) 7 (+10)

Language 2 (Atlantean [native], English, Greek)

Medicine 2 (+5)

Notice 2 (+5)

Search 7 (+10)

 

 

FEATS [+1pp]

Add 1 rank of Attack Focus (Ranged), bringing that to 3 ranks total.

 

 

POWERS [0]

 

Device: Slight adjustment to “Mechano-Mystical Components” (edits to Blast, formatting fixes):

 

Device 1 (“Mechano-Mystical Components,” 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [4PP]

Enhanced Feats 5 (Alternate Power x5 for Heroditus’ Magic [18 points]) {5}

AP: Blast 5 (“bolt of arcane energy”; PFs: Accurate 2, Affects Insubstantial 2, Improved Critical, Precise, Variable Descriptor 2 [any magical]) {18/18}

AP: Create Object 7 (”Alchemy/Transmuted Objects”; up to 7 5-ft. Cubes, Lifting STR 35; Extra: Duration [Continuous]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Innate, Subtle, Variable Descriptor 2 [any matter])  {18/18}

AP: Environmental Control 2 (Light 1, 10-ft. Radius) {2} and Illusion 7 (“holograms;” visual; PF: Progression [10-ft. radius]) {15}  {2+15=17/18}

AP: Move Object 5 (“mage hand”; Str 25; Extra: Damaging; PFs: Precise, Subtle, Variable Descriptor [arcane force or shaped matter]) {18/18}

AP: Transform 3 (“Alchemy/Transmutation,” Any Inanimate Object Into Any Other Inanimate Object; Extras: Duration [Continuous, Lasting]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Progression [Mass] 3 [50 lbs.]) {18/18} 

 

3 left free.

 

Abilities (24) + Combat (16) + Saving Throws (7) + Skills (16) + Feats (11) + Powers (48) - Drawbacks (0) = 122/125 Power Points [3 under]

 

Power Level: 8 (122/125PP)

Unspent Power Points: 3

Trade-Offs: +3 Attack/-3 Effect

 

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NUKED FROM ORBIT by Fox (it was the only way to be sure)

 

Horrorshow

 

10 points to spend!  Just spending 7 now, plus a bit of rearranging.

 

SAVING THROWS [0pp]

Remove “Evasion 2 w/ "Oozey form"“ from next to the Reflex Save line.

 

POWERS [+7pp]

 

Enhanced Feats: For the “Horrific Transformation” EF, please add Fearsome Presence 7. [+7pp]

 

Enhanced Feats 8 ("horrific transformations"; Challenge 1 [Intimidate/Startle as a Move action], Fearsome Presence 7 [35 feet, DC 17])  [8PP]

 

Metamorphic Body: Under the third slot (“Oozey Form”), remove Enhanced Feats 2 (Evasion 2) and increase Super-Movement to 3, adding wall-crawling.

 

Metamorphic Body 10.5 (21 points; PFs: Alternate Power 2) [23PP]

BE: Feature 1 (Mimicry) {1} + Morph 6 (any form, +30 Disguise; PFs: Covers Scent, Precise) {20}   {1+20=21/21}  (“Shapechanger”)

AP: Enhanced Strength 6 (to 26/+8) {6} + Impervious Toughness 10 (Flaw: Limited [Only vs. Physical]) {5} + Leaping 2 (x5; running long jump 90 ft., standing long jump 45 ft, high/vertical jump 22 ft.) {2} + Speed 1 (10 mph/100 feet per round) {1} + Strike 2 ("claws & fangs & lashing tail"; PFs: Improved Critical 1 [19-20], Mighty, Variable Descriptor [bludgeoning/piercing/slashing]) {5} + Super-Movement 1 (Wall-Crawling) {2}  {6+5 +2 +1+5+2=21/21}  (“Chitinous Horror Form”)

AP: Elongation 3 (25 feet) {3} + Insubstantial 1 (liquid) {5} + Strike 5 ("pseudopods"; PFs: Mighty, Variable Descriptor [bludgeoning/piercing/slashing]) {7} + Super-Movement 3 (slithering, slow fall, wall-crawling) {6}  {3+5+7+6=21/21}  (“Oozey Form”)

 

Shapeshift: Under this, below the Quote box, please list this:

 

Default Configuration

Leaping 2 (total Leaping 4 in Chitinous Horror form) [2]

Speed 3 (total Speed 4 in Chitinous Horror form) [3]

Super-Movement 1 (wall-crawling 1; total Wall-Crawling 2 in Chitinous Horror or Oozey forms) [2]

Super-Senses 3 (low-light vision, scent, ultra-hearing) [3]


 

Abilities (26) + Combat (8) + Saving Throws (10) + Skills (18) + Feats (11) + Powers (107) - Drawbacks (3) = 177/180 Power Points [3 free]

 

And at the top of the page

 

Power Level: 10 (177/180PP)
Unspent Power Points: 3
Trade-Offs: -2 Defense/+2 Toughness

 

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Angelic 

5PP 

 

Add Enhanced Feat 1 (Quick Change) to give her Quick Change 2 [1PP] 

Add Intimidate 12 (+12) to Skills [3PP] 

Add Takedown Attack to Feats [1PP]

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Rebellion

Spending 3 of his 8 PP to buy him Luck 3, leaving him with 5 unspent PP.

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