GooseInduced

Question: Immunity. Say I wanted to give her a partial immunity to heat. just... more like a resistance. I'm not sure how it would work. Because It would break down like this Immunity 1 (Heat Flaws: Limited (-1)) [0PP] Or am I mistaken?

Okie dokie! Notice: 1d20+8 27 Good roll! Also yes. I didn't think he was over 300 lbs so I didn't think it would be an issue :-)

Skaere’s chest was still heaving from great breaths. The adrenaline of the fight, more than anything, had pumped her up. The men who were using Vince as their punching bag were on the ground then, bloody and beaten themselves. It felt good to give them a taste of their own medicine. She found herself kneeling with Vince, a hand gently grabbed his shoulder as if the man were going to suddenly fall over. He certainly looked like it. “You are alright.†But no sooner than she spoke did the tiny voice echo from the trees. Her snout lifted quickly to the sky. Her nostrils flared as she sniffed the air, as if to find the source. “What is this, some sort of sick reality TV show?†She growled, standing slowly as her eyes glowed green. “Vince.†Skaere’s voice has dropped low, almost a whisper. She lowered herself into a crouch, looking ready to pounce as she glared at the cameras. “Climb on my back. We need to get out of here. Fast.â€

I would like that! They seem like characters that would work well together. Perhaps they have worked together at some point?

The latter. She's over 7 ft tall so a large "knife" to her would be sized more like a sword XD at least that was my thinking on it.

Fixed the coding. Going to finish typing up all the character info and if no one sees any more issues or conflicts with her build I will put her up for approval

Ugh. Made some edits and messed up my coding DX I will have to fix it later

Thanks! Ok. I will make sure to specify those. It is the, +1 version so I will make sure that's on there. The reason I have the description. That way is because I was getting questions on my concept. I wanted people to know why I made some of the decisions I made.

UPDATED Player Name: GooseInduced Character Name: Power Level: 10 [150/150 pp] Trade-Offs: Unspent Power Points: Progress To Bronze Status: In Brief: Alien Sniper/Archer with enhanced senses and a few tricks up her sleeve. Inspired by both the Na'vi and Guardians of the Galaxy. Alternate Identity: Identity: Birthplace: Occupation: Affiliations: Family: Description: Their planet was large. The majority of the land on this planet consisted of desert. Rich in minerals and resources. The sand of which is more copper and brown colored than the deserts of earth. The entire planet wasn't all desert though. There were large underground rivers that are reachable by many cave systems and feed the more fertile forests and jungles. The sentient species of the planet started in these jungles. A place of dark and rich colors. Coppers and browns, Greens so dark they are nearly black. Time and evolution forced them out of these furtile lands because of all the predators. At one point nearly all of the males were wiped out and out of preservation they fled. As their species and culture grew the men and women each took different roles. The larger, stronger men took on the role of Warriors. While the smaller, faster and more dexterous women took on the roles of Hunters and Gatherers. For reasons that the species took to be spiritual, the predators of the jungle always hunted the men. Not just killed, hunted. They took it as a sign. the jungle didn't want them there. So the women were taught to hunt. Using large bows strong enough to pierce the hides of the fierce beasts within. The species it's self is humanoid. Bipedal and standing between 7 and 8.5 feet tall. The women being on the shorter end of the spectrum. The simplest way to describe their appearance is reptilian, though they are in fact Monotremes. Their skin is covered in plates and scales all along their arms, upper chest, shoulders and backs. The rest of them are still scaled but less armored. Their faces are sleek, the ridge of their wide noses blending seamlessly into their foreheads. The structure is similar to that of a human, though the features are smoothed over. Their ears are flat and non protruding. Their eyes are wide and colorful with the iris extending beyond the visible parts of the eye. Their mouths are full of sharp teeth, though molars in the back mean they have an omnivorous diet. They have hair but it bares little resemblance to the hair of a human. It is thick, almost quill like, though flexible and usually translucent. They rely on plantigrade locomotion (similar to humans). The females have a adapted an opposable big toe to help with climbing in the jungles and this makes them all rather skilled climbers. They are built similarly to a human, though they appear stockier because of the natural armor of their bodies. Age: Human equivalent of 23 Gender: Female Ethnicity: Non-Human Height: 7'3 Weight: 245 lbs Eyes: Gold Hair: Bronze Power Descriptions: History: Personality & Motivation: Powers & Tactics: Complications: Abilities: = 50PP Strength: 24(+7) Dexterity: 28 (+9) Constitution: 22 (+6) Intelligence: 10 (+0) Wisdom: 16 (+3) Charisma: 10 (+0) Combat: 8 + 8 = 16PP Initiative: +13 Attack: +4 Base, +8 Melee (+4 Base, +4 Attack Focus) , +10 Bow (+4 Base, +6 Attack Specialization) Grapple: +12 Defense: +10 (+4 Base, +6 Dodge Focus) +3 Flat-footed Knockback: -5 Saving Throws: 3 + 1 + 3 = 7PP Toughness: +10 (+6 Con, +4 Scales) Fortitude: +9 (+6 Con, +3 base) Reflex: +10 (+9 Dex, +1 base) Will: +6 (+3 Wis, +3 base) Skills: 48R = 12PP Acrobatics 1(+10) Climb 10 (+17) Intimidate 10 (+10) Language 1 (Native Language, Lor) Notice 10 (+13) Stealth 10 (+19) Survival 6 (+9) Feats: 24PP Attack Focus: Melee 4 Attack Specialization : Bow 3 Dodge focus 6 Equipment 3 Improved Initiative Luck Move by Action Precise Shot Quick Draw 2 Skill Mastery: Climb, Intimidate, Notice, Stealth Track Uncanny Dodge (Auditory - Ultra Hearing) Equipment 3 (15 EP container) [14/15EP] Space Age Knife Strike 3 (Feats: Mighty; Features: Improved Critical 19-20) [5/15EP] EX.E Suit Immunity (Life Support) [9/15EP] Powers: 23 + 1 + 3 + 8 + 3 + 2 = 40PP Device 7 (35PP Device, Easy to Lose) Super Alloy Bow and Trick Arrows (Feats: Restricted: Minimum Height 7ft (Arm Length), Feature: Subtle (Collapsible) )[23PP] Trick Arrows (Ammunition, Device; 29PP Array, Feats: Alternate Power 4) [33/35PP] Base Power: Blast 10 (Feats: Improved Critical 2, Improved Range 3 – 1000 ft increments, Range Progression 2, Precise, Split Attack) “Standard Arrow†[29/29PP] Fatigue 9- (Extras: Ranged Feats: Improved Range 1 – 250 ft increments, Sleep) “Night Night Arrow†[29/29PP] Drain 9- (Toughness Extras: Affects Objects (+1), Ranged; Feats: Improved Range 1 – 250 ft increments, Slow Fade - 1 Every 5 rounds) “Slow Burn Acid†[29/29PP] Dazzle 9- Visual - (Extras: Burst 35 - 70ft - General; Feats: Improved Range 1- 250 ft increments, Slow Fade - 1 Every 5 rounds) “Flash Arrowâ€[29/29PP] Snare 9- (Extras: Regenerating; Feats: Improved Range 2 – 500 ft increments) “Gelly Arrowâ€[29/29PP] Leaping 1 [1] Protection 4 - Natural Scales and Plating (Drawback: Noticeable Uncommon, Minor -1PP)[3] Super Senses 1 (Low Light Vision, Distance Sense, Extended Vision 2 - 1000 ft, Infravision, Tracking 2 - Infravision, Ultra Hearing [8] Speed 3 (50mph) [3] Super Strength 1 (+5 Str Carrying Capacity (29), Heavy Load: 1,400 lbs, +1Str - Conditional) [2] DC Block ATTACK RANGE EFFECT Blast 1000 ft DC 25 Toughness Drain 250 ft DC 24 Fortitude (Staged) Dazzle 250 ft DC 25 Reflex + Fortitude Fatigue 250 ft DC 19 Fortitude(Staged) Snare 500 ft DC DC 24 Reflex Strike Touch DC 25 Toughness Totals: Abilities (50) + Combat (16) + Saving Throws (7) + Skills (12) + Feats (25) + Powers (40) - Drawbacks (0) = (150/150) Power Points

I like that idea!!!

QUESTION FOR THE REFS: I plan on her being my hero for the new space themed adventures. My original concept for her included a hologram for blending in on earth. Is it necessary in this case? Will the adventures be on earth at all or a galaxy far far away?

Awesome thanks! Yeah I noticed that miscalculation as well XD already nuked it on my work file. Thanks for pointing it out though :-)

I wasn't sure where to put it XD thanks. Also would the subtle go in the container or add to the actual cost like restricted did?

Alright. I have been working on this and taking everyone's suggestions into account. I was wondering if there is a way to make her bow collapsible. Easier to stow and carry.

Dang. I can't really afford to do a separate rank of device for it and I don't think it's 'equipment'.

Alrighty. Working on tweaking this and realized I grossly miscalculated some stuff so i'm working on getting it all under 150 PP. (misread my own handwriting) Looking through the drawbacks brought up a question. The purpose of the hologram is that she doesn't look human. If she is going to blend in on the planet, or potentially another planet, she would need something that will help her blend in. The book says you can use points in device on different items as long as it is within reason. So I was thinking either a necklace or some sort of bracelet. My question is referring to her normal form. Technically her normal shape is her secret identity. She's trying to blend in. Without her hologram or if it fails she would be exposed. Is that work a drawback of some sort? Also I saw the 'Noticible' drawback and am applying it to her protection

Once she realized that the sky wasn't about to fall down on top of her, Juno let her self relax. Her posture uncurling a bit as she held herself up on her hands. "It's alright Gene. You just... scared the crap outta me." She took a deep breath, blinking as she looked down at herself. She immediately realized exactly what she was wearing, which wasn't much. There was just enough time for her face to turn scarlet before Juno disappeared. She was a little frustrated when she reappeared in her hut, hand running through her hair as she looks down at herself and her bed. Now that she'd had her wake up call it was time to get ready. She didn't want to be the reason people were waiting around.

Sorry my reply took so long. I am finding out that I am very bad as narrating fight sequences. It's very hard for me.

The next thing Skaere knew there were bullets raining down on her. She brought those strong furred arms up and shielded her face as best she could. She felt them hit her, pelting her fur like hail and bouncing off all the same. All it did was make her more angry. Her eyes glowed even brighter and a deep snarl escaped her throat as she closed the distance between them. The closest of the men received her fury first. A blow so hard that it sent the man back into a nearby tree. Another had kept firing at her flank, causing her to bare her teeth as she whipped around. Her claws slashing into the man's arm and disarming him as he crumpled to the ground. She looked to the others, barely pausing as she closed the gap between them. It was if she were daring them to keep fighting.

"Now it's a party." One of the men tried to take a swing at her, baton crackling as it arcs through the air. She spared a thought, wishing that controlling electricity meant she was immune to it. When she ducked out of the way the thought was easily enough shrugged off. "Oh well." Her fist crackled with its own electricity as brought it forward. It wasn't the force of the blow that took the man down. It was the crackling electricity it sent through his body. "Not so fun is it?" She laughed.

Wow! Thanks for all the input guys!!! I really appreciate it! Thevshi: No. I was looking at the core book. I just took a look at the UP though. I didn't realize that there were different rules in there on some things and that they would override the core book. I can always tweak those feats a bit. Maybe take a rank of improved range and put it into progression. I also wasn't sure how visual range worked. I was just assuming it worked similar to other ranges I suppose. I want her to be able to see about a mile like normal. Supercape: Some of my decisions are thematic. I don't have everything out of my head and onto a page yet but the ideas are there I swear!! But yes, I wanted to do a tranquilizer dart of sorts. Wasn't sure how to pull it off and was just trying what looked good. I was hoping i could just add ranged to Corrosion. I realize that Disintegrate is technically the ranged version but all it is is an acid compound. Designed to frustrated robots and potentially weaken that pesky wall so it gets out of the way. But I suppose drain toughness could work. It does a similar thing I suppose. To Clarify I will write a bit of this out and put it on the sheet for others to see. I have been working on the race for a while. I have always liked the idea of the Na'vi from the Avatar movie. Giant Aliens with a naturalistic culture. Using huge bows to impale the much smaller humans throughout the film. They are very interesting. Off and on I have been contemplating a similar race. Something I could use for my own purposes that would capture a similar flavor while being more my style. While Blue Cat people with glow and the dark freckles are sort of the epitome of things I enjoy I had to find my own flavor and thus far the basics are as follows. Their planet was large. The majority of the land on this planet consisted of desert. Rich in minerals and resources. The sand of which is more copper and brown colored than the deserts of earth. The entire planet wasn't all desert though. There were large under ground rivers that are reachable by many cave systems and feed the more fertile forests and jungles. The sentient species of the planet started in these jungles. A place of dark and rich colors. Coppers and browns, Greens so dark they are nearly black. Time and evolution forced them out of these furtile lands because of all the predators. At one point nearly all of the males were wiped out and out of preservation they fled. As their species and culture grew the men and women each took different roles. The larger, stronger men took on the role of Warriors. While the smaller, faster and more dexterous women took on the roles of Hunters and Gatherers. For reasons that the species took to be spiritual, the predators of the jungle always hunted the men. Not just killed, hunted. They took it as a sign. the jungle didn't want them there. So the women were taught to hunt. Using large bows strong enough to pierce the hides of the fierce beasts within. The species it's self is humanoid. Bipedal and standing between 7 and 8.5 feet tall. The women being on the shorter end of the spectrum. The simplest way to describe their appearance is reptilian, though they are in fact Monotremes. Their skin is covered in plates and scales all along their arms, upper chest, shoulders and backs. The rest of them are still scaled but less armored. Their faces are sleek, the ridge of their wide noses blending seamlessly into their foreheads. The structure is similar to that of a human, though the features are smoothed over. Their ears are flat and non protruding. Their eyes are wide and colorful with the iris extending beyond the visible parts of the eye. Their mouths are full of sharp teeth, though molars in the back mean they have a omnivorous diet. They have hair but it bares little resemblance to the hair of a human. It is thick, almost quill like, though flexible and usually translucent. They rely on plantigrade locomotion (similar to humans). The females have a adapted an opposable big toe to help with climbing in the jungles and this makes them all rather skilled climbers. They are built similarly to a human, though they appear stockier because of the natural armor of their bodies.

Hmmmmmmm...... *looks up the feat* Ok. This is a quote right from the book - "This feat improves the range increment of a ranged power, moving the base increment (power rank × 10 feet) one step up the Time and Value Progression Table. So Improved Range 1 makes a ranged power’s increment (rank × 25) feet, then (rank × 50), and so forth. The power still has a maximum range of 10 increments." So if I am reading this correctly that means that the blast 10 now has a range increment of 1000 and max range of that times ten... which is 10,000. Progressive is far less descriptve - "Each time you apply this feat, move the area, range, mass, subjects, or other trait of the power one step up the Time and Value Progression Table. See the power and modifier descriptions for details on specific applications of Progression." Which would do...... what? The only thing I can think that means in that it increases the max range increments? So one rank goes to 25 increments while continuing to apply negatives?

Don't know why my formatting isn't working. I'll fix it later. Bed time now XD

Hello all! Wanna get up the skeleton on my archer to get help and critiques on the build and mechanics. Still writing up all the history and all that but I will add it when it's finished. Mostly wanna make sure what I have isn't trash. Player Name: GooseInduced Character Name: Power Level: 10 [150/150 pp] Trade-Offs: Unspent Power Points: Progress To Bronze Status: In Brief: Alien Sniper/Archer with enhanced senses and a few tricks up her sleeve. Inspired by both the Na'vi and Guardians of the Galaxy. Alternate Identity: Identity: Birthplace: Occupation: Affiliations: Family: Description: Their planet was large. The majority of the land on this planet consisted of desert. Rich in minerals and resources. The sand of which is more copper and brown colored than the deserts of earth. The entire planet wasn't all desert though. There were large under ground rivers that are reachable by many cave systems and feed the more fertile forests and jungles. The sentient species of the planet started in these jungles. A place of dark and rich colors. Coppers and browns, Greens so dark they are nearly black. Time and evolution forced them out of these furtile lands because of all the predators. At one point nearly all of the males were wiped out and out of preservation they fled. As their species and culture grew the men and women each took different roles. The larger, stronger men took on the role of Warriors. While the smaller, faster and more dexterous women took on the roles of Hunters and Gatherers. For reasons that the species took to be spiritual, the predators of the jungle always hunted the men. Not just killed, hunted. They took it as a sign. the jungle didn't want them there. So the women were taught to hunt. Using large bows strong enough to pierce the hides of the fierce beasts within. The species it's self is humanoid. Bipedal and standing between 7 and 8.5 feet tall. The women being on the shorter end of the spectrum. The simplest way to describe their appearance is reptilian, though they are in fact Monotremes. Their skin is covered in plates and scales all along their arms, upper chest, shoulders and backs. The rest of them are still scaled but less armored. Their faces are sleek, the ridge of their wide noses blending seamlessly into their foreheads. The structure is similar to that of a human, though the features are smoothed over. Their ears are flat and non protruding. Their eyes are wide and colorful with the iris extending beyond the visible parts of the eye. Their mouths are full of sharp teeth, though molars in the back mean they have a omnivorous diet. They have hair but it bares little resemblance to the hair of a human. It is thick, almost quill like, though flexible and usually translucent. They rely on plantigrade locomotion (similar to humans). The females have a adapted an opposable big toe to help with climbing in the jungles and this makes them all rather skilled climbers. They are built similarly to a human, though they appear stockier because of the natural armor of their bodies. Age: Human equivalent of 23 Gender: Female Ethnicity: Non-Human Height: 7'3 Weight: 245 lbs Eyes: Gold Hair: Bronze Power Descriptions: History: Personality & Motivation: Powers & Tactics: Complications: Abilities: = 51PP Strength: 25/30(+7/+10 Super strength) Dexterity: 28 (+9) Constitution: 22 (+6) Intelligence: 10 (+0) Wisdom: 16 (+3) Charisma: 10 (+0) Combat: 8 + 12 = 20PP Initiative: +13 Attack: +4 Base, +8 Melee (+4 Base, +4 Attack Focus) , +10 Bow (+4 Base, +6 Attack Specialization) Grapple: +12 Defense: +10 (+6 Base, +4 Dodge Focus) +3 Flat-footed Knockback: -5 Saving Throws: 4 + 1 + 4 = 9PP Toughness: +10 (+6 Con, +4 Scales) Fortitude: +10 (+6 Con, +4 base) Reflex: +10 (+9 Dex, +1 base) Will: +7 (+3 Wis, +4 base) Skills: 56R = 14PP Acrobatics 6(+19/+24) Climb 10 (+17) Intimidate 10 (+10) Notice 10 (+13) Stealth 10 (+19) Survival 10 (+13) Feats: 25PP Attack Focus: Melee 4 Attack Specialization : Bow 3 Dodge focus 4 Equipment 2 Improved Critical 2 - Bow Array 18-20 Improved Initiative Luck Precise Shot Quick Draw 2 Second Chance: Survival Skill Mastery: Climb, Intimidate, Notice, Stealth Startle Track Uncanny Dodge (Auditory - Ultra Hearing) Powers: 19 + 1 + 4+ 12 + 3 + 2 = 31PP Device 6 (30PP Device, Easy to Lose) Super Alloy Bow and Trick Arrows (Feats: Restricted: Strength 24 ), Hologram Device[19PP] Morph 1 - Personal Hologram Device [1/30PP] [array] Trick Arrows (Ammunition, Device; 25PP Array, Feats: Alternate Power 4) [29/30PP] Base Power: Blast 10 (Feats: Improved Range 3 – 1000 ft increments, Precise, Split Attack) [25/25PP] Fatigue 7- Tranquilizer Arrowhead(Extras: Ranged Feats: Improved Range 3 – 700 ft increments, Sedation) [25/25PP] Corrosion 7- Acid Vial Arrowhead(Extras: Ranged Feats: Improved Range 3 – 700 ft increments, Incurable) [25/25PP] Dazzle 10- Visual - Flash Arrowhead (Extras: Burst 35 - 70ft; Flaws: Sense Dependant – Visual; Feats: Indirect, Improved Range 3- 1000ft increments) [25/25PP] Snare 10- Sticky Gel Arrowhead (Extras: Regenerating; Flaws: Entangle; Feats: Improved Range 3 – 1000 ft increments) [25/25PP] [Equipment]Equipment 2 - Space Age Knife (8 pp container) Strike 3 (Feats: Mighty; Features: Improved Critical 19-20) [5PP][/Equipment] Leaping 1 [1] Protection 4 - Natural Scales and Plating[4] Super Senses 1 (Low Light Vision, Darkvision, Distance Sense, Extended Vision 3 - 1 mile, Infravision, Tracking - Infravision, Ultra Hearing [12] Speed 3 (50mph) [3] Super Strength 1 (+5 Str Carrying Capacity, Heavy Load: 3,200 lbs, +1Str - Conditional) [2] DC Block ATTACK RANGE EFFECT Blast 1000 ft DC 25 Toughness Corrosion 700 ft DC 22 Fortitude Dazzle 1000 ft DC 25 Reflex + Fortitude Fatigue 700 ft DC 17 Fortitude(Staged) Snare 1000 ft DC DC 25 Reflex Strike Touch DC 25 Toughness (Staged) Totals: Abilities (51) + Combat (20) + Saving Throws (9) + Skills (14) + Feats (25) + Powers (31) - Drawbacks (0) = (150/150) Power Points

It's Na'vi inspired not necessarily a Na'vi. Think more of scaled hot blooded ranger than nature loving cat person. I've been working on the race and concept for a while. Gonna keep it medium sized but on the upper edge of the size. So a big character but not over 8 feet tall. Long limbs, a rank or two of speed and a rank super strength to represent her larger stature. Gonna give her a device with a limited morph in it. Some space age tech that she can program a single disguise into. Essentially her hero guise is her real form and her every day appearance is a hologram.