Poncho Posted December 23, 2023 Share Posted December 23, 2023 RETCONNED by Thev I requested to the mod team about some changes to Michael to make him match up with the rest of the Claremont class; He's dropping 1 year in age and by 1 PL, coming out of his container, so that he's the same age as the majority of the current Claremont students. I'm also editing some of his other stuff; he has a theme now and a specific complication is now more general to represent what seems to be a consistent temper issue from him. I'm also spending some points I got from this week so the list of changes are as follows; Power Level: 8/10 (156/160) Unspent Power Points: 4 Trade Offs: -1 Attack/+1 Damage, -1 Defense +1 Toughness at PL8, none at PL7 Theme added 'Gamma Hurt my Mom' complication renamed and reworded to 'Red Hot Temper' I found that I had made a mistake in his abilities that wasn't caught; he was at 22 PP of Abilities, not 24. (12 + 6 + 4). This meant that his change in his abilities actually is only 6pp, because he was already overpaying. Wisdom increased by 2 to 14 (+2) for 2pp Charisma increased by 6 to 20 (+5) for 4pp For Skills, 2pp to buy 8 ranks; Current Events gets 2 ranks to 5 Pop Culture gets 5 ranks to 5 Sense motive gets 1 rank to 8 For Feats, Two ranks of Inspire bought for Inspire 3 for 2pp For Saves; moved one point from Will to Reflex to keep his Will save at +9, since it went up due to the increase in Wisdom; I don't see any reason to put his Will Save over his PL. Container had 4 points of Strength and Constitution removed from it, along with 1 point of Impervious Toughness; to make 9 points of shifts 2 points got put into the Array in the container, raising all of the Powers in it by 1 rank, to try and keep him roughly the same level of strength, 2 points got put into Super-Senses to give him Cellular Vision. Since his powers are based around the manipulation of energy in his cells, it seems reasonable he could perceive them to me. that moved 4 points around, then the container was reduced by 5 points to drop it by 1 rank, and a point of Impervious Toughness was moved outside the Container to keep the ranks the same for that, making him immune to like, toothpicks and papercuts as a default level. New Sheet: Spoiler Golden Star Power Level: 8/10 (156/160PP) Unspent Power Points: 4 Trade-Offs: -1 Attack / +1 Damage, -1 Defense / +1 Toughness at PL 8. None at PL7 (7/9 and 7/7) In Brief: Star Student turned Future Star Hero Catchphrase: He wants one but he's still work-shopping it. Theme: Bokura no Spectra- Hiroshi Kitadani Alternate Identity: Michael Adon (Secret) Birthplace: Freedom City Residence: His Parent's House/Claremont High Occupation: Full-Time Student, Part-Time Superhero, Part-Time Everything Else Affiliations: His Family, Claremont, Sampson's Sodas Family: His Father, His Mother, his two brothers, and his best friend Sam Description: Age: 16 (DoB: 2007) Gender: Male Ethnicity: Caucasian Height: 6'2 Weight: 200lbs Eyes: Brown, but tend towards Orange or Red when overheating Hair: Brown, but tend towards Orange or Red when overheating Michael has all the looks of a golden boy; he’s got the broad shoulders and strong arms of the highschool quarterback, the square jaw and well done hair of the class president, the outgoing and happy nature of the most popular kid in class. He’s always wearing something that’s fancy, rather than trendy; he’s the kid who shows up in suits to events, knows how to tie his own tie. He polishes his shoes and irons his own clothes. His Super Suit is a red, white, and gold affair with red boots and shoes, a white bodysuit, and a sun on his chest, with a long, golden cape. History: Michael grew up as a kid in a middle-class household who idolized Superheroes like any other kid. But just as much as them, he idolized the politicians that helped them. You couldn’t be the Freedom League if the Government didn’t have people who supported them, after all. Michael never had any illusions about getting powers of his own; if it happened it’d be great, but he wasn’t waiting for it. Instead, he wanted to be a Human Hero. He wanted to be one of those politicians, helping make sure Heroes had what they needed; to be an advocate for them, and for those who were caught up in Supervillain plots. He was a super fan like no other, and had the drive to try and get there. He put in the effort to be good at everything; he worked hard at sports, joined the Junior World Congress, tried to get to know everyone in his classes and be a mediator. That sort of effort can make other people look at you weird, and Michael wasn’t immune to that, but his genuine nature and positive demeanor kept him on the right path, alongside some choice words from his father. “People look at you weird because they don’t know where they want to go, but you’ve got it all planned out.” People still look at him weird, but it’s not everyone and he doesn’t let the few who do get in the way of the rest of them. One of Michael’s best friends had always been Samantha Sanders, his best friend since childhood. Sam is Michael’s opposite; if he’s High-Strung, she’s Strung-Out, a chronic underachiever, who never had a good direction. Despite this, Sam and Michael have always been good friends; they argued like any friends would, but they’d also always have each other's backs, and when Sam needed some spare cash, Michael was able to parlay his one part-time job into two. The job was at Sampson’s Sodas, a local micro-soda company popular for weird, off-type soda formulas. They weren’t allowed to do any of the real mixing processes, but they helped bottle, fill up vats, and handled orders. It was a good job for a couple of kids, and the employee discount made them quite popular. But one night, a bunch of thugs from the Power-House broke into the company. It turned out that Sampson’s Sodas had a secondary purpose; attempting to further refine the legendary Manaka Root into even greater super powers. This was all on the up and up, a government contract instead of an attempt to corner the superhero market, but with the Power-House using the root for some of it’s enhancements, a little check on the competition had been considered a good idea. During their attempts to escape, Sam and Michael fell into a vat containing an unfinished prototype, one whose records had still been in the process of being written when the Power-House broke in. The scientist working on it was killed, and after the goons trashed the place and got out, Michael and Sam were rescued. A few days later, recovering in the hospital, the two realized they had super powers. Still developing and burgeoning, they grew fairly powerful, but it was clear they were also still at risk; they had more power than they could safely handle, and no one could figure out the formula they had been dumped in. Their powers came from their cells; every one of them supercharged as if their mitochondria were operating at a thousand times the efficiency. Because of this, they were quickly shifted to Claremont High, in an attempt to make sure they didn’t burn themselves out or seriously injure themselves while getting used to their still-growing powers. Michael took the change with a little shell-shock but good-naturedly. He was going to finally get to be the superhero he always wanted to be. Heck, he could be a Superhero and a Politician. The idea of the first public Superhero Mayor, or maybe even Superhero President, dances in his mind. He was popular in his old school but now he’s coming into a new place where he is a brand new, untested individual, and that’s definitely going to cause some issues, but he’s excited for the challenge and excited to meet new people. Now a Sophomore at Claremont, he has a couple of years left before he can head on to, as he sees it, possibly greater heights, and he wants to make every day count. Personality & Motivation: Michael is genuinely the sort of person who who wants to help people and looks on the bright side. His easy-going compassion comes from a gentle life; “It’s easy to be compassionate when you’ve never suffered.” is something that could be leveled at him; but part of why he’s never suffered is he never lets things get him down too much. He might be doing too many things at once, running around as fast as he can to be all he can be, but it’s not caused him to develop a short temper or burn out, yet. He has a vision and is carried forward by it Powers & Tactics: Michael starts almost any interaction with, obviously, an introduction. Since first impressions are important, he makes sure he has a firm handshake and tries to anticipate what the person he’s meeting might want; for kids his age or younger, he’s always got a discount card for Sampson’s stashed on him as a ‘nice to meet you’ gift. For older people, he’s smart enough not to try that unless he knows they have kids or younger relatives. Even when he’s heroing, he keeps to the same ideas; speak from the diaphragm, keep your head up straight, look people in the eye. When he has to fight, he goes for things he learned on the sports field first; tackles, shoulder checks, and some light boxing. He always gives people a chance to find a peaceful resolution first, and never swings unless someone's already swung Power Descriptions: Michael without Overheating doesn’t overtly express his powers; he looks to be a ‘generic’ superhero who just has a lot of biological strength, maybe a low level mutant or the like. When he has to Overheat is when he starts to show signs of being a little different. His eyes shift in color, and he almost seems to glow, like his cells are lighting up, leaving a trail behind him like a streak of sunlight. There’s a low level humming sound to his actions as he moves, almost like his entire body is vibrating, which it is, as his highly charged cells become more and more active. This also ties into his weakness to strong vibrations or those that find the right ‘resonance frequency’ for him; by focusing vibrations on him, his cells start to vibrate out of sync, crashing against each other. Complications: Extra-Extracurricular: Michael is the kind of person who will try anything once and is always willing to volunteer for something new, so he can, at times, be pulled in many different directions by conflicting appointments. This also affects his classes and studies; his attempts to maintain a high GPA can conflict with his extracurricular activities, both normal and super heroic. A Friend Indeed: Michael always wants to be helpful to others and be the ear to listen to their problems or their shoulder to cry on, so if someone asks him for a favor he almost always will do it, as long as it’s not overtly criminal. He generally doesn’t expect anything back for these favors. 1-800-Call-Sam: Sam is Michael’s best friend, and even when it may not be the best idea, he’d drop anything to help her. Sam’s issues with adjusting to a suddenly different life and brand new world make him even more intent to be there when she needs his help, and when she gets in trouble he’s almost always the first person she calls Earnest Weirdo: His iron-clad goals and focus on plotting out his entire life can make Michael seem weird or strange to people, or even make him seem fake or slimy. These aren’t true, but it can create a difficult first impression. Sampson’s Employee of the Month: Because he is one of only two people who were exposed to the Manaka Root formula that gave him his powers, Michael is still vital to Sampson’s Sodas research. They function as an unofficial sponsor of him, but in return he has duties to them, which still include his part-time job. Burnt-Out: Michael’s ‘Overheating’ Powerset can only be maintained for an hour a day safely, and any more than that risks hurting him or deactivating his powers entirely for a day or even longer; while he may eventually overcome these weaknesses, for now he tries to keep a very strict limit on how long he Overheats. Red Hot Temper: Michael, despite his cheery attitude, has had several events happen to him that have left marks on him; his mother was severely injured by Gamma the Atom Smasher, and he was at one point kidnapped by a ghostly sorcerer in an attempt to revive his corporal body. His fully powered state also floods his body with adrenaline, heightening his emotional state. This means he can, at time, become quite angry or combative, or have to spend time reigning in his emotions at an inopportune moment. Michael does not enjoy these outbursts and works to control them. Subject Zero: The underground human modification ring the Power House is the reason that Michael developed superpowers in the first place. As they also use Manaka Root extract, Michael is a fascinating test subject given his highly advanced powers, and the underground doctors and surgeons would almost certainly want to obtain Michael, or samples of his tissue, to try and recreate the formula that was used on him to enhance their own superhero factories. New Kid on the Block: Due to his late joining at Claremont both in the year and the entire education process, and his late development of Superpowers, Michael does not have much of a grounding in the Superpowered world at this moment; his powers are still coming in and could result in spontaneously changing or becoming unstable, he doesn't really have any friends at Claremont or in the greater Hero community right now, and he no longer has near as much time as he used to for all his old friends. Abilities: 6 + 0 + 6 + 4 + 4 + 10 = 30PP Strength: 28/24/16 (+9/+7/+3) Dexterity: 10 (+0) Constitution: 28/24/16 (+9/+7/+3) Intelligence: 14 (+2) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 20 (+5) Combat: 14 + 14 = 28PP Initiative: +0 Attack: +7 Melee, +7 Ranged Defense: +7 (+7 Base), +4 Flat-Footed Grapple: +21(up to +27)/+17 (up to +20)/+10 Knockback: -7/-4/-1 Saving Throws: 0 + 6 + 7 = 13PP Toughness: +9/+7/+3 (+9/+7/+3 Con, Impervious 5/1/0) Fortitude: +9/+7/+3 (+9/+7/+3 Con, +0) Reflex: +6 (+0 Dex, +6) Will: +9 (+2 Wis, +7) Skills: 52R = 13PP Diplomacy 7 (+12), Skill Mastery Knowledge (Civics) 4 (+6) Knowledge (Business) 3 (+5) Knowledge (Current Events) 5 (+7) Knowledge (Pop Culture) 5 (+7) Notice 6 (+8) Skill Mastery Perform 4 (Oratory) (+9) Skill Mastery Profession (Politician) 4 (+6) Search: 6 (+8) Sense Motive: 8 (+10) Skill Mastery Feats: 8PP Connected Inspire 3 Interpose Leadership Quick Change Skill Mastery (Diplomacy, Notice, Perform, Sense Motive) Powers: 8 + 8 + 1 + 11 + 39 = 67PP All Powers are Biological, Biochemical, and Kinetic Enhanced Strength 8 (to 24/+7) (The Strength of an Exploding Sun) [8PP] Enhanced Constitution 8 (to 24/+7) (The Resilience of an Exploding Sun) [8PP] Impervious Toughness 1 (Tougher than Toothpicks and Papercuts) [1PP] Array 3(Golden Array; 6 points; Feats: Dynamic, Dynamic Alternate Power 2) [11PP] Dynamic Base Power: Flight 1-3 (Star Powered Flight, 10-50 mph / 100-500 feet per Move action) {2-6 PP} Dynamic Alternate Power: Quickness 1-3 (Explosive Thoughts, 2-10x) + Speed 1-3 (Shining Speed, 10-50 mph / 100-500 feet per Move action) {2-6 PP} Dynamic Alternate Power: Super-Strength 1-3 (Effective Strength 29-39) {2-6PP} Container 8 (Solar Flare/Overheating Mode; 40 PP, Drawback: Move Action to Activate) [39PP] Enhanced Strength 4 (to 28/+9) [4PP] Enhanced Constitution 4 (to 28/+9) [4PP] Impervious Toughness 4 (to 5) [4PP] Immunity 9 (Life Support) [9PP] Super Senses (Infravision, Radio, Ultra-Hearing, Ultravision, Microscopic Vision 2) [6PP] Array 4 (Empowered Golden Array; 8 points; Feats: Dynamic, Dynamic Alternate Power 2) [13PP] Dynamic Base Power: Flight 1-4 (Star Powered Flight, 10-100 mph / 100-1000 feet per Move action) {2-6 PP} Total: Flight 1-7 (10-1000 mph / 100-10,000 feet per Move action) Dynamic Alternate Power: Quickness 1-4 (2-25x) + Speed 1-4 (10-100 mph / 100-1000 feet per Move action) {2-6 PP} Total: Quickness 1-7 (2-250x) + Speed 1-7 (10-1000 mph / 100-10,000 feet per Move action) Dynamic Alternate Power: Super-Strength 1-4 (Effective Strength 33-48) {2-6PP} Total: Super-Strength 1-7 (Effective Strength 33-63) Drawbacks: (-3) + (-0) = -3PP Vulnerability (Vibration; Frequency: Common; Intensity: Moderate [x1.5]) [-3PP] DC Block ATTACK RANGE SAVE EFFECT Unarmed Touch DC 24/22/18 Toughness Damage Totals: Abilities (30) + Combat (28) + Saving Throws (13) + Skills (13) + Feats (8) + Powers (67) - Drawbacks (3) = 156/160 Power Points Link to comment
Huckleberry Posted December 28, 2023 Share Posted December 28, 2023 (edited) Character Edit Request (Rot) I’m going with a top-to-bottom approach to character sheet edits, hoping this will be convenient Spending 11 of 12 available Power Points Power Level: Increase from PL 7 to PL 8 Trade-Offs: Change from -2 Defense/+2 Toughness to -3 Defense/+3 Toughness Power Descriptions, last sentence: remove the word “decay”, so that the visual effects appear for all of her powers (flight, resisting damage, etc.) Constitution: Reduce from 28 to 14/(32) (but see Enhanced Constitution, below) [-14 PP] Initiative: Point spends below will change her initiative bonus from +4 to +16/+0 Attack: Point spends below will change her attack bonus from +7 Withering Strikes, +3 Base to +8 Withering Strikes, +4 Melee, +3 Base Knockback: changing from 9 Impervious Toughness to 8 Impervious Toughness and 11 total Toughness . . don't know if this rounds down to a knockback modifier of -9 or rounds up to -10 . . . Toughness: corrections and point spends below will change her modifier from +9 (+9 Impervious) to +11 (+8 Impervious) Fortitude: Edits made here and below will change her bonus from +12 to +13. Direct spend on Fortitude will decrease from +3 to +2, for a small PP refund. [-1 PP] Reflex: Bonus increases from +12 to +13, as does direct spend. [1 PP] Will: Bonus and direct spend increase from +12 to +13 [1 PP] Feats: Melee Focus 1 [1 PP] Feats: remove Improved Initiative [-1 PP] Array 14.5 (1 Alt): Increases to Array 16.5 (1 Alt) [4 PP] Corrosion 7 (Autofire 1, Slow Fade) increases to Corrosion 8 (Autofire 1, Slow Fade) {4PP} Disintegration 7 (Area: Shapeable, Distracting, Action -1, Precise) increases to Disintegration 8 with same details {4PP} Flight 3: Decreases to Flight 1, but see stacked Flight 2 in new Array 2 (1 Alt) [-4 PP] Impervious Toughness: Decreases from 9 to 8 [-1 PP] New Power: Array 2 (1 Alt) [5 PP] Base Power: Enhanced Improved Initiative 4 (Energize) Alternate Powers: Flight 2 (Full Throttle – stacked with Flight 1 above) New Power: Enhanced Constitution 18 (Stacks with Constitution to a total of 32) [18 PP] New Power: Immunity 1 (Own damage and drain effects) [1PP] New Power: Feature (Rot has 5 friendship bracelets made of the same mysterious black fabric as her super suit. A person wearing a Friendship Bracelet is immune to the effects of Rot's Untouchable Drawback.) [1 PP] Arithmetic Summary: -14 Reduced Con -1 Fortitude Refund 1 Reflex 1 Will 1 Melee Focus -1 remove Improved Initiative 4 Array (Corrosion/Disintegration) -4 Flight Reduction -1 Impervious Reduction 5 New Array (Energize/Full Throttle) 18 Enhanced Con 1 Immunity Own 1 Feature (Friendship Bracelets) 11 Power Points Edited December 28, 2023 by Huckleberry typo Link to comment
RocketLord Posted December 29, 2023 Share Posted December 29, 2023 WISHED AWAY by Thev A small update for Forever Boy's description. Please change it to this, including the picture, removing the old ones: --- Pan is an attractive young man with wild, semi-long dark red hair and green eyes. He has an athletic build, which he doesn’t mind showing with mostly form fitting clothing. Pan prefers green and red clothing, rarely wearing any dark colors. He almost always seem to be smiling. In uniform, Pan wears an emerald green suit with golden yellow details. A golden yellow line runs up the front of each of his legs from his feet, where he wears flared red pirate boots with golden yellow soles and detailing. The yellow lines on his legs run up past his belt and up his ribs, curving in and meeting at his solar plexus. A pair of stylized golden yellow wings stretch out from that connecting point of the golden lines at his solar plexus and up his chest to his shoulders, where they run around and connect at his back. The uniform ends in a golden ring at Pan's neck. He wears green gloves that seem to be part of the sleeves until he takes them off. He wears a red belt with a golden buckle, as well as an emerald green domino mask. Pan has taken to wearing a dark red coat with golden details, often wearing it both with and without his uniform. Link to comment
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