Maze

As Je'watched, the whole scene seemed to be in a panic. People running away from her like insects on an overturned log. She did not understand why they were acting as such. Perhaps they were ashamed for the cowardance of these men who had challeneged her. She could see no other explination. Returning to her defeated pray, ignoring the two men who's beast she'd thrown as they scampered off, Je'La placed a hand on its hide. The beast was cold and lifeless, its skin a strange material she did not recognise. She sniffed it, and did not detect the scents of sweat or blood, but a strange stining acidic smell that burnt her eyes. Disgusting. It was unfit to be eaten Turning from the fallen beast, she lifted off the ground, raising up to survay the area in hopes of finding better fare elsewhere.

Well, Im going to be busy most of the week, so can we set it after the parade? Like Next Week maybe?

Well, threads made viewtopic.php?f=12&t=1732

For use in the welcome to the modern world thread.

March 22nd Je'La sat tucked behind the building, stalking her pray. This enviroment was strange to her, but the herds of great beasts here were not to different from those on her world. The lumbering brutes travled in great rows, growling and gurgling as they went. They did not have feet, but strange round limbs which turned quickly. Waiting for her chance, she spotted one that appeared weak and pounced! Her prey was a hair faster than she was and swerved out of the way, releasing a great cry as it did. The other beasts also began crying as they parted around Je'La. In the confusion, one of the beasts was unable to get out of the way quick enough and nearly crashed into Je'la. Her reflexes where sharp, however, and and she braced herself, slamming her fist down upon the beasts head, its bones crumpling under her blow. Great black blood splattered out of the wound. But then, strangly, out of the beasts stomach, stepped a man. He began shouting at Je'La, screaming strange words that she couldnt understand. His face was red and angry. Perhaps he was mad at her for stealing his prey? Either way, he seemed mad, and she guessed he was issuing a challenge for onership of the kill. Je'La took a deep breath and roared her responce. The challenger's face went pale as her turned and fled. From nearby, a new beast appeared, one which cried a high pitched scream as it moved. It stopped several paces away, and as before, people appeared out of it. These ones were dressed in matching furs, bright blue. They pulled strange shaped objects, curved and gray. They shouted at Je'La, and she bellowed her war cry in responce. There was suddenly a great crack, like a bolt of thunder. Je"La felt a slight sting as something struck her shoulder. They had accepted her challenge it seemed. Narrowing her gaze, she let loose bolts of might from her eyes. The two challengers ducked behind there beast as the beams cut through it. Charging forward, she grabbed the animal and lifted it above her head, looking down on her challegers who sat cowering. They did not understand the way these constasts were. They were small and weak. She tossed their beast aside, where it landed against one of the large structures nearby.

Ok, yay teamwork. But with two hero's against him, will Captain be ok?

Well Arrow hawk asked first, so I think he's got dibs on being the hero. And While Captain may be intresting, I have trouble seeing him as likely to try and turn Je'La to the side of evil. Wouldnt he hate her for her powers?

I dont know who they are, sorry.

well, that'll work. Now, we need a villain.

Well the prove herself thing isnt going to start to later. Right now its more "Oh My god, where am I, what are all these strange things?" Panic type reaction. Causing traffic accidents and bringing the police whom then shoot at her isnt helping the situation.

Also, How's the hero supposed to tell Je'La's actions from genuin evil villain-ness.

Archery, no, but it would be simple enough that she could understand the concept if she were to see it.

Oooh, very tempting. Actually, I think that might work out just fine. Any takers? Also subdue: To incapacitate, either by way of verbally calming or physically rendering incapable of causing further damage.

Je'la is an extraterrestrial from the planet Jupiter. Having been abducted by Grue scouts who later crashed in Roswell, New Mexico. She spent the next half century in stasis until the capsule holding her ran out of power and she revived, breaking out of the facility. Je'la 's world is equivalent to stone age technology, so finding herself in the modern world is quite an overwhelming experience. As a result, she's going to be going on a rampage through freedom attempting to fend off the attacks of the 'big metal monsters' (Cars) And men with 'magic fire' (Police officers with guns), Until someone comes along and manages to either calm her down or subdue her. Oh, and did I mention she doesn't speak any earth language?

Oh, cool. Thanks for that :D

I’m new here, and working on my first character for this site, so please be nice, as Im rather new at this. My idea for my character is that she is a teenage girl who has come into possession of a artifact which allows her to tap into parallel universes and gain the abilities of her duplicates from those worlds for a period of time. I figure the best way to do this would be to take an alternate form as the starting power, and have the other forms as alternate powers. In order to keep this from being over powered, I was going to add the uncontrolled, unreliable and full action flaws, representing that A) the power is hard to use and doesn’t always work it takes time to activate and C) she has no control over which alternate version of herself she’ll become. My question is this. Does this character seems to be usable idea on this site? I’d like to get a feel for my chances of approval before getting started so as to avoid difficulties later on. And to get some advise on how to actually go about making such a complex character. Thanks! Possible Alternate forms include -Elemental version (earth, fire, wind, water) -Alternate size (big and small) -Alternate evolutionary development (Primordial blob and hyper intelligent brain) And possibly others (Open to suggestions)