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Player Name: Tsura

Character Name: La Luchadora

Power Level: 10

Trade-Offs: +2 Toughness, -2 defense

Unspent Power Points: 0

Progress To Bronze Status: 0/30

In Brief: (1-2 sentences which sum up the whole character)

Alternate Identity: Theresa Estacada

Identity: Secret

Birthplace:

Occupation:

Affiliations: (People and/or groups you work with)

Family:

Description:

Age: DoB:

Apparent Age: (if applicable)

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: Spaniard

Height: 6’4

Weight: 204 lbs

Eyes: Aquamarine

Hair: Aubern

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Power Descriptions:

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History:

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Complications:

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Abilities: 6 + 4 + 6 + 0 + 4 + 4 = 24PP

Strength: 30/16 (+10/+3)

Dexterity: 14 (+2)

Constitution: 30/16 (+10/+3)

Intelligence: 10 (+0)

Wisdom: 14 (+2)

Charisma: 14 (+2)

Combat: 12 + 8 = 20PP

Initiative: +2

Attack: +6 Melee, +6 Ranged, +10 Unarmed

Grapple: +26

Defense: +8 (+4 Base, +4 Dodge Focus), +2 Flat-Footed

Knockback: -11/-21

Saving Throws: 0 + 6 + 7 = 13PP

Toughness: +12 (+2) (+10 Con, +2, 10 Impervious)

Fortitude: +10 (+2) (+10 Con, +0)

Reflex: +8 (+2 Dex, +6)

Will: +9 (+2 Wis, +7)

Skills: 40R = 10PP

Acrobatics* 8 (+10)

Perform* (Oratory) 8 (+10)

Intimidate* 7 (+9)

Notice* 6 (+8)

Knowledge (Business) 10 (+10)

Language (Native Spanish, English) 1

Feats: 19PP

Attractive

Attack Specialization (Unarmed) 2

Benefit (Wealth 2)

Dodge Focus 4

Chokehold

Fascinate (Perform: Oratory)

Fearless

Improved Grab

Improved Grapple

Improved Pin

Improved Throw

Luck 2

Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Perform (Oratory), Intimidate, Notice)

Powers: 14+14+2+10+14+4+4+2= 63PP

Enhanced Strength 14 [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Enhanced Constitution 14 [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Protection 2 [2PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Impervious 10 [10PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Super Strength 10 ( Feats:Bear Hug, Coming Through!, Muscle Tearing Grip, Shockwave ) [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Speed 4 [4PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Leaping 4 [4PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

Enhanced Feat 2 ( Affects Insubstantial 2 (Applied to Strength)([2PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors)

DC Block

(see below)

Totals: Abilities (24) + Combat (20) + Saving Throws (13) + Skills (10) + Feats (19) + Powers (64) - Drawbacks (0) = 150 Power Points

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Very solid overall.

With your saves, you'd want to note the unpowered saved bonus for them; so Toughness would be +12/+5 (+10/+3 Con, +2 [Protection]). Fort would be similar.

You might consider dropping Will by 1 or 2; unofficial rule of thumb is saves averaging PL-1. That said, I think if you feel there's a strong justification for 2 saves at 10...go for it! Certainly what I've gathered from your comments in chat tells me those are both strong saves for her.

We try to mark the skills you have SM with, but I don't remember the formatting trick offhand. But that's purely formatting.

Um...hm. I guess maybe type it as "Impervious Toughness 10"? 6 one way, half-a-dozen the other.

Designate the native language, and give the # of ranks (likely "1").

Finally, if those feats are effectively Alternate Powers, I might suggest writing them out like that for easy reference.

Otherwise, looks good!

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