Sriseru

Alright, fixed.

Finally! Thanks for looking it over, good luck with your exams.

Also, I've answered your question by adding the "Motivations & Goals" section to the character sheet. Is it enough, or should I add more?

I don't suppose anyone could look over my character sheet again? A week has already passed.

Okay.

Is the format of the rage and size modifiers acceptable?

Alright, thanks, I just wanted to check.

Okay, I posted the last message about 11 days ago in this thread. Have I forgotten to do something?

Alright, done!

According to Kenson, "Generally speaking, making a container innate does not make all of its effects innate, as with devices."

Sorry, my bad. I've made the changes.

Also, regarding the change of Feats in the different forms. The Sorceress Form has the Attractive Feat because, well, she is still the same person mentally, but most humans tend to be easily more attracted to near-humans than to dragons.

The change of Attack Focus could be explained on the Sorceress' smaller size and loss of strength, while the Dragon doesn't have any ranged attacks... I don't know, I simply did it to make the character more flexible.

If you have Morph/Metamorph, you don't need Alternate Form. Metamorph effectively gives you an entirely new character sheet (though mental attributes and skill ranks & feats should stay largely the same, to represent the fact it's still the same mind); you can just assign powers to the Dragon Form sheet without need for the Alternate Form power.

Well, I used Alternate Form simply because I could add the Innate feat to the whole Container, reflecting the fact that those powers within Alternate Form are core abilities for the character's species, and thus can never be nullified.

Alright, I hope this build is more suitable.

Players Name: Sriseru

Power Level: 10 (150/150pp)

Trade-Offs: None (-1 Attack for +1 Save Difficulty, -1 Defense for +1 Toughness Save in Dragon Form)

Unspent PP: 0

Characters Name: Sari the Black

Alternate Identity: Dark Sigma

Height: 6' (7' in Dragon Form)

Weight: 150 lbs (2300 lbs in Dragon Form)

Hair: Jet Black (none in Dragon Form)

Eyes: Slitted Deep Blue

Dimensions (In Dragon Form): Overall Length 31ft, Body Length 11ft, Neck Length 9ft, Tail Length 11ft, Body With 5ft, Standing Heigth 7ft, Maximum Wingspan 45ft, Minimum Wingspan 18ft.

Sorceress Form

Stats: 10pp

Str: 8 (-1), 12 (+1) when raging.

Dex: 10 (+0)

Con: 10 (+0)

Int: 20 (+5)

Wis: 14 (+2)

Cha: 8 (-1)

Combat: 30pp

Attack: +5 Base, +10 Ranged

Grapple: +4, +6 when raging

Defense: +10 (+5 flat-footed), +8 (+4 flat-footed) when raging.

Knockback: -8

Initiative: +5

Saves: 19pp

Toughness: +0, +9 (Imp 8) with Force Field

Fortitude: +6 (+0 Con, +6), +8 when raging.

Reflex: +7 (+0 Dex, +7)

Will: +8 (+2 Wis, +6), +10 when raging.

Skills: 20r = 5pp

Bluff 0 (-1), (+3) when considered attractive

Climb 0 (-1)

Computers 0 (+5)

Concentration 0 (+2)

Craft (all) 0 (+5)

Diplomacy 0 (-1), (+3) when considered attractive

Disable Device 0 (+5)

Intimidate 13 (+12)

Investigate 0 (+5)

Knowledge (all) 0 (+5)

Medicine 0 (+2)

Notice 5 (+7)

Search 0 (+5)

Sense Motive 2 (+4)

Survival 0 (+2)

Swim 0 (-1)

Feats: 13pp

All-Out Attack

Attack Focus (ranged) 5

Attractive

Eidetic Memory

Improved Grab

Jack-Of-All-Trades

Power Attack

Rage

Speed of Thought

Powers: 73pp

Comprehend 2 (Languages - Speak All, Understand All) [4]

Flight 1 (10 mph, 100 ft/round; Flaws: Gliding -1) [1]

Force Field 9 (Extras: Impervious [8 ranks only] +1) [17]

Immunity 3 (Aging, Disease, Poison) [3]

Morph 5 (Single Appearance, Dragon Form +25 Disguise; PFs: Metamorph) [6]

Regeneration 3 (Resurrection 3 [5 hours]; Extras: True Resurrection; PFs: Diehard, Regrowth) [8]

Suffocate 10 (Extras: Alternate Save [Will] +0, Ranged +1; PFs: 4 Alternate Powers) [34]

AP: Blast 10 (Fire Blast; Extras: Secondary Effect +1)

AP: Drain 10 (Will Score; Extras: Alternate Save [Will] +0, Ranged +1, Secondary Effect)

AP: Healing 10 (Extras: Standard Action +1, Total +1; Flaws: Personal -1)

AP: Move Object 10 (Telekinesis; Extras: Damaging +1, Perception Range +1; Flaws: Distracting -1)

DC Block:

ATTACKS: SAVE DC: DAMAGE TYPE:

Blast 10 -- 25/Toughness -- Damage (Secondary Effect)

Drain Will 10 -- 20/Will -- Mental Damage (Secondary Effect)

Move Object 10 -- 25/Toughness -- Telekinetic Damage

Suffocate 10 -- 20/Will -- Damage

Unarmed -- 14/Toughness -- Damage

Unarmed (raging) -- 16/Toughness -- Damage

Costs: Abilities (10) + Combat (30) + Saves (19) + Skills (5) + Feats (13) + Powers (73) - Drawbacks (0) = 150

Dragon Form

Stats: 12pp

Str: 10/24 (+0/+7), 28 (+9) when raging.

Dex: 10 (+0)

Con: 10/14 (+0/+2)

Int: 20 (+5)

Wis: 12 (+2)

Cha: 8 (-1)

Combat: 32pp

Attack: +5 Base, +9 Melee (-1 size modifier)

Grapple: +21 (+4 size modifier), +23 when raging

Defense: +9 (+4 flat-footed), +7 (+3 flat-footed) when raging. (-1 size modifier)

Knockback: -14 (-4 size modifier)

Initiative: +5

Saves: 17pp

Toughness: +11 (Imp 9)

Fortitude: +6 (+2 Con, +4), +8 when raging.

Reflex: +7 (+0 Dex, +7)

Will: +8 (+2 Wis, +6), +10 when raging

Skills: 20r = 5pp

Climb 0 (+3)

Computers 0 (+5)

Concentration 0 (+2)

Craft (all) 0 (+5)

Disable Device 0 (+5)

Intimidate 13 (+14) (+2 size modifier)

Investigate 0 (+5)

Knowledge (all) 0 (+5)

Medicine 0 (+2)

Notice 5 (+7)

Search 0 (+5)

Sense Motive 2 (+4)

Stealth 0 (-4) (-4 size modifier)

Survival 0 (+2)

Swim 0 (+3)

Feats: 11pp

All-Out Attack

Attack Focus (melee) 4

Eidetic Memory

Improved Grab

Jack-Of-All-Trades

Power Attack

Rage

Speed of Thought

Powers: 75pp

Additional Limbs 1 (Tail; PFs: Innate) [2]

Comprehend 2 (Languages - Speak All, Understand All) [4]

Enhanced Strength 6 [6]

Flight 3 (Wings, 50 mph, 500ft/round) [6]

Growth 4 (Large; Extras: Continuous Duration +1; Flaws: Permanent -1; PFs: Innate) [13]

Immunity 3 (Aging, Disease, Poison) [3]

Morph 5 (Single Appearance, Sorceress Form +25 Disguise; PFs: Metamorph) [6]

Protection 9 (Scales; Extras: Impervious +1) [18]

Regeneration 3 (Resurrection 3 [5 hours]; Extras: True Resurrection; PFs: Diehard, Regrowth) [8]

Strike 4 (Teeth and claws; PFs: Mighty) [5]

Super-Senses 4 (Darkvision, Scent, Tracking [scent]) [4]

Drawbacks: -2pp

Power Loss (Flight, if wings are immobilized, -2 points)

DC Block:

ATTACKS: SAVE DC: DAMAGE TYPE:

Strike -- 26/Toughness -- Damage

Unarmed -- 22/Toughness -- Damage

Unarmed (raging) -- 24/Toughness -- Damage

Costs: Abilities (12) + Combat (32) + Saves (17) + Skills (5) + Feats (11) + Powers (75) - Drawbacks (2) = 150

Description: Reborn through decades of torture and brainwashing, and controlled by misdirected rage and hatred, Dark Sigma is the servant of Mandragora and Omega. She can't recall anything from before she served her masters, save for a few shadows in her dreams, and emotions from forgotten memories.

In her Sorceress Form, Dark Sigma looks like an african american woman with long black hair and deep blue, slitted eyes. She wears long black boots, black pants, a black belly shirt, black glovettes, and a black cape. Also her teeth are pointed. When she flies in this form, her cape turns into black, bat-like wings.

In her Dragon Form, Dark Sigma is a large, slender western dragon, she is covered by black scales, though her underside and wing membrane are dark blue, and her slitted eyes are deep blue.

History:

The Beginning and the End

Sari was born in a world without man or civilization, but with wild, proud beasts. The greatest of these beasts were the dragons known as the Draic. These beasts wielded the ability to take on a second form, each form differed according to each individual.

Sari's mother was a white Draic who tended her hatchling on her own, as her mate had died in a hunt. The white Draic had an unconditional love for all things, and Sari was her greatest pride and love.

Then Omega, the destroyer of worlds, arrived. Accompanying him was Mandragora, and upon noticing the dragons, he felt inclined to battle their kind once more. It didn't take long before Mandragora encountered the white Draic and fought her, but she was alot more powerful than he had anticipated and the battle ensued for a long time before he managed to kill her. But just as he had slayed his foe he could feel the world dying around him and was about to leave when he noticed little Sari, the dragon hatchling was mourning her mother's death. Mandragora somehow felt that she was special, he also knew that the hatchling of such a powerful dragon had to become a great addition to Omega's army, with proper training that is. Having no time to waste, Mandragora grabbed Sari and narrowly escaped the death of her world.

The Taming of the Beast

When Mandragora returned to the Terminus he immediately shared his plan to tame and train the dragon hatchling, with his master, Omega. The Overlord was intrigued when he heard how powerful the hatchling's mother had been.

When Sari was brought in to say the oath, she hissed at Omega and said "I will never be yours, evil one", even though she had heard what he was capable of and what he had done. In response she was sent to Physician Friendly where she was tortured, brainwashed and given a punishment chip.

Mandragora had told Sari that the torture would end only after she had said the oath, but she still refused to say it, even after being on the brink of death every single day. Over three decades passed before she was completely broken and willing to say the oath to her new master. Directly after having done so, the dragoness stated that she had forgotten her name, and she asked Omega what it was. And the Overlord answered, you are Dark Sigma, the dragon of death.

Rebirth

Dark Sigma spent the following three years training herself to be a warrior of the Omega, and Mandragora proved to be a great mentor.

When her training had been completed, she was ordered by Omega to undermine the Earth Prime universe, in order to ensure the future invasion.

Personality: While she may be over thirty years old, Dark Sigma has the physical and mental maturity of an eighteen-year-old, due to the fact that her kind ages more slowly. And her humanoid Sorceress Form is evidence of that.

Dark Sigma is a twisted being, a perversion of her young self, and is fervently commited to do whatever it takes in order to complete her mission.

Beside her obediance for her masters, Dark Sigma is completely ruled by rage, hatred and sorrow. Her psychological pain is enough for the entire multiverse. Dark Sigma is incapable of dealing with this normally, the torture made sure of that, instead she deals with it by making others feel even worse. Nothing is below her, and few things can stop her.

Dark Sigma's brainwashing is deep, but it's still possible to undo it, somehow...

One last detail, Dark Sigma has a beautiful singing voice and she used to love to sing, but she has forgotten about that.

Motivation & Goals: Dark Sigma's mission is to eliminate the major factors which have kept Omega from successfully invading Earth Prime, the metahumans, AEGIS, and other forces. She may attempt to divide and cause conflict by promoting war, anarchy, corruption, or by supporting the wrong people.

While she may team up with others, Dark Sigma will only do so to further her own goals, and she will betray her team-mates if she can gain more from doing so.

Complications:

* Amnesia (Doesn't remember anything from before she served Omega)

* Hatred (Virtually of everything)

* Insane (She is psychologically scarred and traumatized, overwhelming her with rage, hatred and sorrow)

* Punishment Chip (Though only Omega can use this)

* Temper (Quick to anger. Also, any mention of her mother will throw her into blind rage)

Note: It is possible for Dark Sigma's brainwashing to be undone. However, the exact nature of this event in game terms is better left to the GMs to decide, I think.