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Name: Thomas Hallister

Height: 5'6

Weight: 154 lbs

Eyes: brown-now silver

Hair: Black-now bald

Stats:

str: 10

dex: 16(+3)

con: 14(+2)

int:14(+2)

wis:16(+3)

cha:14(+2)

Points-24

Saves

Fort: +3

Toughness:+6

Ref:+6

Will:+6

Points:7

Combat

Attack: +2/+6 electrical control

Defence: 3/6(dodge)

Init:+14

points:10

Skills

Computers:1(6) 1 rank

Craft(electronics):1(6) 1 rank

Disable device:1(7) 1 rank

Diplomacy:1(7)1 rank

Gather info:1(6) 1 rank

Notice:1(7) 1 rank

Proffession:1(7) 1 rank

Sense motive:1(7) 1 rank

points:8

Feats:

attack spec:blast, 2

dodge 3

Imp init

instant up

move by action-drive by attack

uncanny dodge

Points:9

Powers:

Electrical control 6

AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink

Super Speed 2

AP:Wall run

Protection 4

Points:26

Complications: Ex-Con(Reputation)

Disturbing appearance

Drawbacks: Powerloss in water(electricity,superspeed) *if immersed in more than 20 gallons*

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10

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9

+37

Thomas Hallister was a one time computer technician for a local gang-he'd shut down the security systems before they went in..that was, at least, until his "people" abandoned him during a heist gone wrong-an attempt to steal proto type computer software backfired, leaving Thomas with several months of amnisia-and the powers of electrical control and super-speed.

He soon became a leading member of a group dedicated to reforming criminals-he eventually graduated and began using his powers to protect those who cannot protect themselves-though some still wonder about his true alligances.

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You'll need to list the actual ranks for all his APs. And distances for his Teleport would be convenient.

And we (well, I, at least) prefer things to be listed alphabetically. So, please alphabetize his feats.

Combat

Attack: +6

Defence: 3/6(dodge)

Init:+14

points:10

Does he have a BAB of +2? That's the only way his combat totals can cost 10pp, 4pp for BAB +2 and 6pp for BDB +3. If this is the case, his attack needs to be listed as "Attack +2, +6 w/ Electrical Control"

Defense should be written as "+6 (+1 flat-footed)"

Feats:

Imp init

dodge 3

attack spec:blast, 2

move by action-drive by attack

uncanny dodge

instant up

Points:10

That's 9 feats, not 10.

Skills

Computers:1(6)

Craft(electronics):1(6)

Disable device:1

Diplomacy:1(7)

Gather info:1(6)

Notice:1(7)

Proffession:1(7)

Sense motive:1(7)

points:8

It appears you've listed the number of pp spent on each skill, not the ranks. Please list the actual ranks, i.e., "Computers 4 (+6)".

Electrical control 10

AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink

Super Speed 2

AP:Wall run

Protection 4

Points:34

I'm counting 37pp (23+10+4) in powers, not 34.

Another problem is that, if his attack bonus with Electrical Control/Blast is +6, then as a PL 6 character he can only have at most Electrical Control 6. The only way he could have Electrical Control 10 is if his attack bonus with his Electrical Control is +2 (trading a -4 to hit for a +4 in power/damage).

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93

Could you please spell out what these are? Also, why is he at 93? The Drawback points should be calculated in as negatives, giving him a total of 90pp.

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Powers:

Electrical control 6

AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink

Super Speed 2

AP:Wall run

Protection 4

Points:26

That's 29pp (12+3+10+4), not 26. And you still need to list the ranks for those APs.

Drawbacks: Powerloss in water(electricity,superspeed) *if immersed in more than 20 gallons*

24

7

10

8

9

+37

Please list how many pp the Drawback is worth, and what all those numbers are for.

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