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Players Name: Master_Pelle

Power Level: 11

Power Points: 152

Unspent Power Points: 2

Characters Name: Naga Fist

Real Name: Sunan Raibanchi

Other Aliases: Naak Mat, Warrior of Nagas

Identity: Secret

Age: 24

Height: 6'2"/192 cm

Weight: 196 lb/89 kg

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Affiliation: None

Occupation: Freelance Diver and Thaiboxer

Nationality: Thailand

Base of Operation: Freedom City

DESCRIPTION: Sunan is a young and handsome asian man with tanned skins. He have short black hair and a small scar on his right cheek that he got from one of the Deep Ones. His body build is nicely muscled and he look quit agility. He normally wear his grey t-shirt and jean, or else he will just simple wear his trunk at the warm beach.

When he transform into Naga Fist, a blue gem appear on his left hand and it is glowing. He is doing some thaiboxning dance so that he is swirling by mystical energy that is coming out from his gem and it take shape of giant naga before then it turn into full-platted armor. The armor is blue colored that have golden stripes, and his helmet is taking shape of Naga head and the visor is taking shape of open moth.

PERSONALITY: Sunan is quit a nice a person who want to do the right thing. He love very much diving into the water and also he like training in thaiboxning but he don't mind to try out other fighting style. He is sometime a ladyman who like to charm pretty ladies and he don't easily give up when he tried to pick up a girl. He don't like hurting pretty females so that he like to avoid much as possibly by hurting them.

HISTORY: Sunan was born in a village near the Makong River in Thailand. In his early age, he have been trained in thaiboxning with one of the elder who was a former thaiboxer champion. When he was not trained thaiboxing, he always diving into the river and explored the water world. As he grew older, he become a skilled thaiboxer who developed his own style of thaiboxing and also participated in thaiboxning match in Bangkok but he is also part time working as diver.

One day he travel back to his home village to participated the festival for an extraordinary phenomenon of Naga Fireballs near the Mekong River. Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he walking near the Makong river to see the river but then suddently see a beautiful female naga at near the river who was captured in net by group of Deep Ones, a scaled humenoid creatures from underwater world. Sunan was surprised by the sight of it but he have a feeling that he should rescue her. Without hesitant himself, he jumped directly at the Deep Ones and using his thaiboxing skills. The fight was difficult for Sunan when he tried to fight against group of Deep Ones who is stronger than him. Even they are stronger than him, his fighting skill are much better than them and he defeated all of them except one who seem to be the leader of the group. Before the last Deep Ones tried to escape, it clawed at Sunan's face so that he got a nasty scar on his right cheek. After Sunan saved the female naga, she introduce herself as Princess Phailin the daughter of one of the Naga Kings and told him that the Deep Ones tried to kidnapped her so that her father was forced to give the immortality potions to them.

Princess Phailin took Sunan to the Naga Kingdom in Mekong so that he will get rewarded for his good deed. When he arrived to the Naga Kingdom, he meet the three headed naga who happening to be a one of the Naga Kings. The Naga King was impressed by Sunan heroism who are willing to save his daughter so that he give his own mystical gem to him as reward. Sunan was quit unsure about it first but Princess Phailin convinced him that he should take it and it will bring great powers. Sunan took the Naga King's gem and before he know it, the gem was fused into Sunan's left hand.

After Sunan gained the Naga King's gem, another force of Deep Ones are attacking the Naga Kingdom and it was leading by same Deep One who was the same leader of the group who tried to captured Phailin. The nagas warrior went out and tried to fighting against the overwhelming force of Deep Ones and the nagas started lose slowly against them. Sunan tried to use his newly gained powers and he transformed into warrior of nagas. Sunan went to support the naga against the Deep Ones. Both side battled hard until Sunan face the same Deep Ones leader again, both of them fight against each other but with Sunan's new powers he using his Naga Fireball in underwater to completly destroy the Deep Ones leader. After Deep One's leader was destroyed, all of them fled from the battle.

After the battle, the Naga King want him to live with them in their kingdom and gain the potion of immortality but Sunan rejected the offer and decided that he should try to live as normal man and use his powers to fight against the evil. But Sunan taking the part of the naga's Naga Fireballs ceremony and shoot out the fireballs out from the river while common humans at the land are watched at the Naga Fireballs.

After the encounter with the nagas, he moved to Freedom City in USA because he have heard about that greater evils existing there. Since then, he have started working more as freelance diver who can take any kind of diving jobs and started adopted his own hero identity as Naga Fist.

QUOTE: "With my fists and power of Naga King, I will defeat you!"

STATS:

Str: 26/18 (+8/+4) (8 pp)

Dex: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Con: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Int: 10 (+0)

Wis: 14 (+2) (4 pp)

Cha: 10 (+0)

COMBAT:

BAB: +8 (16 pp)

Melee: +12

Ranged: +8

Blast: +12

BDB: +12 (24 pp)

Flat-Footed: +6

Initiative: +8

Grapple: +22/+16

Knockback: -4/-2

DAMAGES:

Unarmed: +8/+4

Blast: +8

SAVES:

Toughness: +8/+4

Fortitude: +7 (3 PP)

Reflex: +10 (6 PP)

Will: +6 (4 PP)

SKILLS: Acrobatics 12 (+16), Language 4 (Native: Thai; English, Laos, Japanese, Mandarin), Notice 8 (+10), Knowledge (Earth Science) 4 (+4), Perform (Dance) 4 (+4), Sense Motive 8 (+10), Swim 12 (+20/+16).

FEATS: Acrobatic Bluff, All-Out Attack, Attack Focus (Melee) 4, Attack Specialization (Blast) 2, Attractive, Environmental Adaptation (Aquatic), Evasion, Improved Initiative, Instant Up, Move-By Action, Power Attack, Stunning Attack, Takedown Attack.

POWERS: Blast 8 (Description: Naga Fireball, Magic) (16 pp), Enhanced Strength 8 (Description: Magic) (8 pp), Immunity 3 (Description: Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure) (3 pp), Protection 4 (Description: Magic) (4 pp), Super-Sense 1 (Description: Magic; Low-Light Vision) (1 pp), Super-Strength 2 (Description: Magic; Heavy Load: 1.5 tons) (4 pp), Swimming 6 (Description: Magic; 100 MPH; Alternate Powers: Flight 3 [50 MPH]) (7 pp).

COMPLICATION: Don't Want to Hurt Pretty Ladies.

DRAWBACKS: Normal Identity (Must performing thaiboxning dance to transform, Full Action) (-4 pp).

TRADE-OFFS: +2 Attack/-2 Save DC, +2 Defense/-2 Toughness.

COSTS: Abilities (28) + Combat (40) + Saves (13) + Skills (13) (52 Skill Points) + Feats (17) + Powers (43) - Drawbacks (4) = 150

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Players Name: Master_Pelle

Power Level: 11

Power Points: 152

Unspent Power Points: 2

Characters Name: Naga Fist

Real Name: Sunan Raibanchi

Other Aliases: Naak Mat, Warrior of Nagas

Identity: Secret

Age: 24

Height: 6'2"/192 cm

Weight: 196 lb/89 kg

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Affiliation: None

Occupation: Freelance Diver and Thaiboxer

Nationality: Thailand

Base of Operation: Freedom City

DESCRIPTION: Sunan is a young and handsome asian man with tanned skins. He have short black hair and a small scar on his right cheek that he got from one of the Deep Ones. His body build is nicely muscled and he look quit agility. He normally wear his grey t-shirt and jean, or else he will just simple wear his trunk at the warm beach.

When he transform into Naga Fist, a blue gem appear on his left hand and it is glowing. He is doing some thaiboxning dance so that he is swirling by mystical energy that is coming out from his gem and it take shape of giant naga before then it turn into full-platted armor. The armor is blue colored that have golden stripes, and his helmet is taking shape of Naga head and the visor is taking shape of open moth.

PERSONALITY: Sunan is quit a nice a person who want to do the right thing. He love very much diving into the water and also he like training in thaiboxning but he don't mind to try out other fighting style. He is sometime a ladyman who like to charm pretty ladies and he don't easily give up when he tried to pick up a girl. He don't like hurting pretty females so that he like to avoid much as possibly by hurting them.

HISTORY: Sunan was born in a village near the Makong River in Thailand. In his early age, he have been trained in thaiboxning with one of the elder who was a former thaiboxer champion. When he was not trained thaiboxing, he always diving into the river and explored the water world. As he grew older, he become a skilled thaiboxer who developed his own style of thaiboxing and also participated in thaiboxning match in Bangkok but he is also part time working as diver.

One day he travel back to his home village to participated the festival for an extraordinary phenomenon of Naga Fireballs near the Mekong River. Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he walking near the Makong river to see the river but then suddently see a beautiful female naga at near the river who was captured in net by group of Deep Ones, a scaled humenoid creatures from underwater world. Sunan was surprised by the sight of it but he have a feeling that he should rescue her. Without hesitant himself, he jumped directly at the Deep Ones and using his thaiboxing skills. The fight was difficult for Sunan when he tried to fight against group of Deep Ones who is stronger than him. Even they are stronger than him, his fighting skill are much better than them and he defeated all of them except one who seem to be the leader of the group. Before the last Deep Ones tried to escape, it clawed at Sunan's face so that he got a nasty scar on his right cheek. After Sunan saved the female naga, she introduce herself as Princess Phailin the daughter of one of the Naga Kings and told him that the Deep Ones tried to kidnapped her so that her father was forced to give the immortality potions to them.

Princess Phailin took Sunan to the Naga Kingdom in Mekong so that he will get rewarded for his good deed. When he arrived to the Naga Kingdom, he meet the three headed naga who happening to be a one of the Naga Kings. The Naga King was impressed by Sunan heroism who are willing to save his daughter so that he give his own mystical gem to him as reward. Sunan was quit unsure about it first but Princess Phailin convinced him that he should take it and it will bring great powers. Sunan took the Naga King's gem and before he know it, the gem was fused into Sunan's left hand.

After Sunan gained the Naga King's gem, another force of Deep Ones are attacking the Naga Kingdom and it was leading by same Deep One who was the same leader of the group who tried to captured Phailin. The nagas warrior went out and tried to fighting against the overwhelming force of Deep Ones and the nagas started lose slowly against them. Sunan tried to use his newly gained powers and he transformed into warrior of nagas. Sunan went to support the naga against the Deep Ones. Both side battled hard until Sunan face the same Deep Ones leader again, both of them fight against each other but with Sunan's new powers he using his Naga Fireball in underwater to completly destroy the Deep Ones leader. After Deep One's leader was destroyed, all of them fled from the battle.

After the battle, the Naga King want him to live with them in their kingdom and gain the potion of immortality but Sunan rejected the offer and decided that he should try to live as normal man and use his powers to fight against the evil. But Sunan taking the part of the naga's Naga Fireballs ceremony and shoot out the fireballs out from the river while common humans at the land are watched at the Naga Fireballs.

After the encounter with the nagas, he moved to Freedom City in USA because he have heard about that greater evils existing there. Since then, he have started working more as freelance diver who can take any kind of diving jobs and started adopted his own hero identity as Naga Fist.

QUOTE: "With my fists and power of Naga King, I will defeat you!"

STATS:

Str: 26/18 (+8/+4) (8 pp)

Dex: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Con: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Int: 10 (+0)

Wis: 14 (+2) (4 pp)

Cha: 10 (+0)

COMBAT:

BAB: +8 (16 pp)

Melee: +12

Ranged: +8

Blast: +12

BDB: +12 (24 pp)

Flat-Footed: +6

Initiative: +8

Grapple: +22/+16

Knockback: -4/-2

DAMAGES:

Unarmed: +8/+4

Blast: +8

SAVES:

Toughness: +8/+4

Fortitude: +7 (3 PP)

Reflex: +10 (6 PP)

Will: +6 (4 PP)

SKILLS: Acrobatics 12 (+16), Language 4 (Native: Thai; English, Laos, Japanese, Mandarin), Notice 8 (+10), Knowledge (Earth Science) 4 (+4), Perform (Dance) 4 (+4), Sense Motive 8 (+10), Swim 12 (+20/+16).

FEATS: Acrobatic Bluff, All-Out Attack, Attack Focus (Melee) 4, Attack Specialization (Blast) 2, Attractive, Environmental Adaptation (Aquatic), Evasion, Improved Initiative, Instant Up, Move-By Action, Power Attack, Stunning Attack, Takedown Attack.

POWERS: Blast 8 (Description: Naga Fireball, Magic) (16 pp), Enhanced Strength 8 (Description: Magic) (8 pp), Immunity 3 (Description: Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure) (3 pp), Protection 4 (Description: Magic) (4 pp), Super-Sense 1 (Description: Magic; Low-Light Vision) (1 pp), Super-Strength 2 (Description: Magic; Heavy Load: 1.5 tons) (4 pp), Swimming 6 (Description: Magic; 100 MPH; Alternate Powers: Flight 3 [50 MPH]) (7 pp).

COMPLICATION: Don't Want to Hurt Pretty Ladies.

DRAWBACKS: Normal Identity (Must performing thaiboxning dance to transform, Full Action) (-4 pp).

TRADE-OFFS: +2 Attack/-2 Save DC, +2 Defense/-2 Toughness.

COSTS: Abilities (28) + Combat (40) + Saves (13) + Skills (13) (52 Skill Points) + Feats (17) + Powers (43) - Drawbacks (4) = 150

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Players Name: Master_Pelle

Power Level: 11

Power Points: 152

Unspent Power Points: 2

Characters Name: Naga Fist

Real Name: Sunan Raibanchi

Other Aliases: Naak Mat, Warrior of Nagas

Identity: Secret

Age: 24

Height: 6'2"/192 cm

Weight: 196 lb/89 kg

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Affiliation: None

Occupation: Freelance Diver and Thaiboxer

Nationality: Thailand

Base of Operation: Freedom City

DESCRIPTION: Sunan is a young and handsome asian man with tanned skins. He have short black hair and a small scar on his right cheek that he got from one of the Deep Ones. His body build is nicely muscled and he look quit agility. He normally wear his grey t-shirt and jean, or else he will just simple wear his trunk at the warm beach.

When he transform into Naga Fist, a blue gem appear on his left hand and it is glowing. He is doing some thaiboxning dance so that he is swirling by mystical energy that is coming out from his gem and it take shape of giant naga before then it turn into full-platted armor. The armor is blue colored that have golden stripes, and his helmet is taking shape of Naga head and the visor is taking shape of open moth.

PERSONALITY: Sunan is quit a nice a person who want to do the right thing. He love very much diving into the water and also he like training in thaiboxning but he don't mind to try out other fighting style. He is sometime a ladyman who like to charm pretty ladies and he don't easily give up when he tried to pick up a girl. He don't like hurting pretty females so that he like to avoid much as possibly by hurting them.

HISTORY: Sunan was born in a village near the Makong River in Thailand. In his early age, he have been trained in thaiboxning with one of the elder who was a former thaiboxer champion. When he was not trained thaiboxing, he always diving into the river and explored the water world. As he grew older, he become a skilled thaiboxer who developed his own style of thaiboxing and also participated in thaiboxning match in Bangkok but he is also part time working as diver.

One day he travel back to his home village to participated the festival for an extraordinary phenomenon of Naga Fireballs near the Mekong River. Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he walking near the Makong river to see the river but then suddently see a beautiful female naga at near the river who was captured in net by group of Deep Ones, a scaled humenoid creatures from underwater world. Sunan was surprised by the sight of it but he have a feeling that he should rescue her. Without hesitant himself, he jumped directly at the Deep Ones and using his thaiboxing skills. The fight was difficult for Sunan when he tried to fight against group of Deep Ones who is stronger than him. Even they are stronger than him, his fighting skill are much better than them and he defeated all of them except one who seem to be the leader of the group. Before the last Deep Ones tried to escape, it clawed at Sunan's face so that he got a nasty scar on his right cheek. After Sunan saved the female naga, she introduce herself as Princess Phailin the daughter of one of the Naga Kings and told him that the Deep Ones tried to kidnapped her so that her father was forced to give the immortality potions to them.

Princess Phailin took Sunan to the Naga Kingdom in Mekong so that he will get rewarded for his good deed. When he arrived to the Naga Kingdom, he meet the three headed naga who happening to be a one of the Naga Kings. The Naga King was impressed by Sunan heroism who are willing to save his daughter so that he give his own mystical gem to him as reward. Sunan was quit unsure about it first but Princess Phailin convinced him that he should take it and it will bring great powers. Sunan took the Naga King's gem and before he know it, the gem was fused into Sunan's left hand.

After Sunan gained the Naga King's gem, another force of Deep Ones are attacking the Naga Kingdom and it was leading by same Deep One who was the same leader of the group who tried to captured Phailin. The nagas warrior went out and tried to fighting against the overwhelming force of Deep Ones and the nagas started lose slowly against them. Sunan tried to use his newly gained powers and he transformed into warrior of nagas. Sunan went to support the naga against the Deep Ones. Both side battled hard until Sunan face the same Deep Ones leader again, both of them fight against each other but with Sunan's new powers he using his Naga Fireball in underwater to completly destroy the Deep Ones leader. After Deep One's leader was destroyed, all of them fled from the battle.

After the battle, the Naga King want him to live with them in their kingdom and gain the potion of immortality but Sunan rejected the offer and decided that he should try to live as normal man and use his powers to fight against the evil. But Sunan taking the part of the naga's Naga Fireballs ceremony and shoot out the fireballs out from the river while common humans at the land are watched at the Naga Fireballs.

After the encounter with the nagas, he moved to Freedom City in USA because he have heard about that greater evils existing there. Since then, he have started working more as freelance diver who can take any kind of diving jobs and started adopted his own hero identity as Naga Fist.

QUOTE: "With my fists and power of Naga King, I will defeat you!"

STATS:

Str: 26/18 (+8/+4) (8 pp)

Dex: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Con: 18 (+4) (8 pp)

Int: 10 (+0)

Wis: 14 (+2) (4 pp)

Cha: 10 (+0)

COMBAT:

BAB: +8 (16 pp)

Melee: +12

Ranged: +8

Blast: +12

BDB: +12 (24 pp)

Flat-Footed: +6

Initiative: +8

Grapple: +22/+16

Knockback: -4/-2

DAMAGES:

Unarmed: +8/+4

Blast: +8

SAVES:

Toughness: +8/+4

Fortitude: +7 (3 PP)

Reflex: +10 (6 PP)

Will: +6 (4 PP)

SKILLS: Acrobatics 12 (+16), Language 4 (Native: Thai; English, Laos, Japanese, Mandarin), Notice 8 (+10), Knowledge (Earth Science) 4 (+4), Perform (Dance) 4 (+4), Sense Motive 8 (+10), Swim 12 (+20/+16).

FEATS: Acrobatic Bluff, All-Out Attack, Attack Focus (Melee) 4, Attack Specialization (Blast) 2, Attractive, Environmental Adaptation (Aquatic), Evasion, Improved Initiative, Instant Up, Move-By Action, Power Attack, Stunning Attack, Takedown Attack.

POWERS: Blast 8 (Description: Naga Fireball, Magic) (16 pp), Enhanced Strength 8 (Description: Magic) (8 pp), Immunity 3 (Description: Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure) (3 pp), Protection 4 (Description: Magic) (4 pp), Super-Sense 1 (Description: Magic; Low-Light Vision) (1 pp), Super-Strength 2 (Description: Magic; Heavy Load: 1.5 tons) (4 pp), Swimming 6 (Description: Magic; 100 MPH; Alternate Powers: Flight 3 [50 MPH]) (7 pp).

COMPLICATION: Don't Want to Hurt Pretty Ladies.

DRAWBACKS: Normal Identity (Must performing thaiboxning dance to transform, Full Action) (-4 pp).

TRADE-OFFS: +2 Attack/-2 Save DC, +2 Defense/-2 Toughness.

COSTS: Abilities (28) + Combat (40) + Saves (13) + Skills (13) (52 Skill Points) + Feats (17) + Powers (43) - Drawbacks (4) = 150

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Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together.

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Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together.

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Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together.

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Trade-offs: Attack/Save DC: +12/+8, Defense/Toughness: +12/+8

Cost: Ability 28 + Combat 40 + Saves 13 + Skills 13 + Feats 17 + Powers 43 – Drawbacks 4 = 150 PPs.

Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

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Trade-offs: Attack/Save DC: +12/+8, Defense/Toughness: +12/+8

Cost: Ability 28 + Combat 40 + Saves 13 + Skills 13 + Feats 17 + Powers 43 – Drawbacks 4 = 150 PPs.

Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

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Trade-offs: Attack/Save DC: +12/+8, Defense/Toughness: +12/+8

Cost: Ability 28 + Combat 40 + Saves 13 + Skills 13 + Feats 17 + Powers 43 – Drawbacks 4 = 150 PPs.

Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

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Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

It seem that I forgot to change the immunity ranks. I will edited that.

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

Yes, he must do his thai boxning dance (it call Ram Muay) for full round to transform himself.

By the way, I made a slightly changed the color of his armor from green to blue instead because he will look pretty much as one of superhero in Thaialnd

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Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

It seem that I forgot to change the immunity ranks. I will edited that.

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

Yes, he must do his thai boxning dance (it call Ram Muay) for full round to transform himself.

By the way, I made a slightly changed the color of his armor from green to blue instead because he will look pretty much as one of superhero in Thaialnd

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Two small things:

1. “Immunity 1 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)†should be listed as Immunity 3 (Cold, Drowning, Pressure)

It seem that I forgot to change the immunity ranks. I will edited that.

2. I assume, based on your description text, that he has to do his “Thai dance†for a full round in order to be able to transform. Is that correct?

Yes, he must do his thai boxning dance (it call Ram Muay) for full round to transform himself.

By the way, I made a slightly changed the color of his armor from green to blue instead because he will look pretty much as one of superhero in Thaialnd

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Toptomcat wrote:

Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together

"No style is superior all the time, one must choose the style that is superior at the moment. to quote Lee June Fan

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Toptomcat wrote:

Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together

"No style is superior all the time, one must choose the style that is superior at the moment. to quote Lee June Fan

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Toptomcat wrote:

Cool, a Thai boxer. I've got a Gracie Jujutsu fighter coming for my PL 6 character- maybe they could team up sometime.

Maybe, but it will be a huge PL different if they are working together

"No style is superior all the time, one must choose the style that is superior at the moment. to quote Lee June Fan

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I have looked over the build and this is what I found...............

Abilities: 28

Combat: 40

Saves: 10

Skills: 13

Feats: 17

Powers: 16, 8, 3, 4, 1, 4, 7 = 43

Drawbacks: -4

-total: [150]- 147

“Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he found a female naga who was captured by group of Deep Ones. Sunan went to rescue the female naga from the Deep Ones by using his thaiboxing skills and defeated all of them even they are stronger than him but he got a small scar on his right cheek.â€Â

1a] What are the deep ones?

1b] How did he find the women in trouble?

1c] What kind of trouble was she in?

1d] Even though they were stronger than he was, how did he get the scar on his face?

2] What kind of job does he have with his dibing ability?

3] Is the Naga gem a known magic item? Did he know what powers it would give him before he took it?

4] Trade offs should be posted as +2 attack/-2 save DC, +2 tough/-2 BDB. It is easier for us to read.

5] If you would please put how much each power costs beside it for easier adding.

6] I am not sure that complication will work. I will have to discuss it with the other ref’s.

7] Immunity says [Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure] Is that supposed to be immunity 4 or that all immunities are magic in origin?

8] I am not sure getting flight from a swimming power is justified.

9] Is the gem always visible? It may be hard to have a normal identity with a big gem protruding from your hand.

10] I count 147 points.

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I have looked over the build and this is what I found...............

Abilities: 28

Combat: 40

Saves: 10

Skills: 13

Feats: 17

Powers: 16, 8, 3, 4, 1, 4, 7 = 43

Drawbacks: -4

-total: [150]- 147

“Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he found a female naga who was captured by group of Deep Ones. Sunan went to rescue the female naga from the Deep Ones by using his thaiboxing skills and defeated all of them even they are stronger than him but he got a small scar on his right cheek.â€Â

1a] What are the deep ones?

1b] How did he find the women in trouble?

1c] What kind of trouble was she in?

1d] Even though they were stronger than he was, how did he get the scar on his face?

2] What kind of job does he have with his dibing ability?

3] Is the Naga gem a known magic item? Did he know what powers it would give him before he took it?

4] Trade offs should be posted as +2 attack/-2 save DC, +2 tough/-2 BDB. It is easier for us to read.

5] If you would please put how much each power costs beside it for easier adding.

6] I am not sure that complication will work. I will have to discuss it with the other ref’s.

7] Immunity says [Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure] Is that supposed to be immunity 4 or that all immunities are magic in origin?

8] I am not sure getting flight from a swimming power is justified.

9] Is the gem always visible? It may be hard to have a normal identity with a big gem protruding from your hand.

10] I count 147 points.

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I have looked over the build and this is what I found...............

Abilities: 28

Combat: 40

Saves: 10

Skills: 13

Feats: 17

Powers: 16, 8, 3, 4, 1, 4, 7 = 43

Drawbacks: -4

-total: [150]- 147

“Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he found a female naga who was captured by group of Deep Ones. Sunan went to rescue the female naga from the Deep Ones by using his thaiboxing skills and defeated all of them even they are stronger than him but he got a small scar on his right cheek.â€Â

1a] What are the deep ones?

1b] How did he find the women in trouble?

1c] What kind of trouble was she in?

1d] Even though they were stronger than he was, how did he get the scar on his face?

2] What kind of job does he have with his dibing ability?

3] Is the Naga gem a known magic item? Did he know what powers it would give him before he took it?

4] Trade offs should be posted as +2 attack/-2 save DC, +2 tough/-2 BDB. It is easier for us to read.

5] If you would please put how much each power costs beside it for easier adding.

6] I am not sure that complication will work. I will have to discuss it with the other ref’s.

7] Immunity says [Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure] Is that supposed to be immunity 4 or that all immunities are magic in origin?

8] I am not sure getting flight from a swimming power is justified.

9] Is the gem always visible? It may be hard to have a normal identity with a big gem protruding from your hand.

10] I count 147 points.

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I have looked over the build and this is what I found...............

Abilities: 28

Combat: 40

Saves: 10

Skills: 13

Feats: 17

Powers: 16, 8, 3, 4, 1, 4, 7 = 43

Drawbacks: -4

-total: [150]- 147

“Before the evening of Naga Fireballs, he found a female naga who was captured by group of Deep Ones. Sunan went to rescue the female naga from the Deep Ones by using his thaiboxing skills and defeated all of them even they are stronger than him but he got a small scar on his right cheek.â€Â

1a] What are the deep ones?

1b] How did he find the women in trouble?

1c] What kind of trouble was she in?

1d] Even though they were stronger than he was, how did he get the scar on his face?

2] What kind of job does he have with his dibing ability?

3] Is the Naga gem a known magic item? Did he know what powers it would give him before he took it?

4] Trade offs should be posted as +2 attack/-2 save DC, +2 tough/-2 BDB. It is easier for us to read.

5] If you would please put how much each power costs beside it for easier adding.

6] I am not sure that complication will work. I will have to discuss it with the other ref’s.

7] Immunity says [Magic; Cold, Drowning, Pressure] Is that supposed to be immunity 4 or that all immunities are magic in origin?

8] I am not sure getting flight from a swimming power is justified.

9] Is the gem always visible? It may be hard to have a normal identity with a big gem protruding from your hand.

10] I count 147 points.

1a: Deep Ones are races from Freedom City setting.

1b: I forgot the part where I should write that he walking near the river and then he spotted her.

1c: Well the deep ones are tried to captured her because she is a princess and I should add description that using something to captured her.

1d: Well, while fighting against them, one of the them successfully clawed at him at his face.

2: I don't know about it, he is more like a freelance diver who do any kind of diving job.

3: I have reading little the myth of Naga that it is said they have gem on head or throat where it said that it hold mystical powers and it could give away to other person. So in in other word he may know little about that gem hold powers but he don't what kind of powers it held but he take it anyway.

4: I will change that.

5: Ok, I will try to add the points cost.

7: The immunity is from magic origin.

8: Well, it is from magical origin so that he gain magic ability to swim in the water and also can "swim" in the air too.

9: Hmm... I will try to change the part of it.

10: It is actually 150 points because the total cost of save is 13 not 10, if you simple removed the attributes bonus from the save, you will see the actually amount of save cost.

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