Undine (PL7) Breella

[Breella]

She's a work in progress, don't laugh at her... please.

Feedback is always accepted, however right now I'm posting her here as more of an "oh gosh, this crappy computer might not save"

[b][u]Player Name[/u]:[/b] Breella

[b][u]Character Name[/u]:[/b] Cordelia Evans

[b][u]Power Level[/u]:[/b] 7 0/105PP

[b][u]Trade-Offs[/u]:[/b] +/-0 Attack / +/-0 Damage, +/-0 Defense / +/-0 Toughness (or "None")

[b][u]Unspent Power Points[/u]:[/b] 0

[b][u]Progress To Bronze Status[/u]:[/b] 0/30


[b][u]In Brief[/u]:[/b] (1-2 sentences which sum up the whole character)


[b][u]Alternate Identity[/u]:[/b] Undine 

[b][u]Identity[/u]:[/b] Secret

[b][u]Birthplace[/u]:[/b] Marthasville, MO

[b][u]Occupation[/u]:[/b] Student Teacher

[b][u]Affiliations[/u]:[/b] Claremont

[b][u]Family[/u]:[/b] Shelby Evans (Mother) Zane Evans (step Father) Flaven (birth Father)


[b][u]Description[/u]:[/b] Cordelia is a leggy long blonde haired, sky blue eyed bombshell. She has a lean muscular build in part to farm work and a long history of swim team. She has one set of piercings in her ear in which she often wears blue pearls, which were a gift from her birth father. 

[b]Age:[/b] 20 ([i]DoB:[/i] March 20th 1990)

[b]Apparent Age:[/b] late teens

[b]Gender:[/b] Female

[b]Ethnicity:[/b] White 

[b]Height:[/b] 5ft 9in

[b]Weight:[/b] 130lbs

[b]Eyes:[/b] Light Blue

[b]Hair:[/b] Sandy Blonde


[b][u]Power Descriptions[/u]:[/b]

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[b][u]History[/u]:[/b]


[b][u]Personality & Motivation[/u]:[/b]


[b][u]Powers & Tactics[/u]:[/b] 


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[b][u]Complications[/u]:[/b]

[b]Name:[/b] [Description]

[i]Example:[/i]

[b]Secret:[/b] Identity.



[b][u]Abilities[/u]:[/b] 4 + 0 + 4 + 0 + 4 + 0 = 12PP

Strength: 14 (+2)

Dexterity: 10 (+0)

Constitution: 14 (+2)

Intelligence: 10 (+0)

Wisdom: 14 (+2)

Charisma: 10 (+0)



[b][u]Combat[/u]:[/b] 14 + 8 = 22PP

Initiative: +4

Attack: +7 Melee, +7 Ranged

Grapple: +2 ( 0 + 2 + 0 + 0)

Defense: +8 (+4 Base, +4 Dodge Focus), +2 Flat-Footed

Knockback: -0



[b][u]Saving Throws[/u]:[/b] 5 + 6 + 5 = 16PP

Toughness: +2 (+2 Con, +0 [Other])

Fortitude: +2 (+2 Con, +5)

Reflex: +0 (+0 Dex, +6)

Will: +2 (+2 Wis, +5)



[b][u]Skills[/u]:[/b] 44R = 11PP

Concentration [12] (+14)

Notice [12] (+14)

Search [12] (+12)

Swim [8] (+10,+22)




[b][u]Feats[/u]:[/b] 12PP

Dodge Focus 4

Endurance 3

Improved Aim

Improved Disarm

Improved Initiative 

Precise Shot 2


[b][u]Powers[/u]:[/b] 16 + 2 + 2 = 20PP


[b]Power of the Sea Array 7 ([/b]14PP Array; [i]Feats:[/i] Alternate Power 2: [i]Flaws[/i]: [b])[/b] [16PP]

[array][u]Base Power[/u]: [b]Blast 7 ([/b]Water Spout; [i]Extras[/i]: ; [i]Flaws[/i]: Action [Full]; [i]Feats[/i]: Accurate; [i]Drawbacks[/i]:[b])[/b] {7/14}


[u]Alternate Power[/u]: [b]Suffocate 7 ([/b]Drowning; [i]Extras[/i]: ; [i]Flaws[/i]:[b])[/b] {7/14}


[u]Alternate Power[/u]: [b]Deflect 3([/b]Caught in the tide; [i]Extras[/i]: Action(Free), Ranged; [b])[/b] {12/14}


[b]Swimming 2 ([/b]~5 MPH[b])[/b] [2PP]


[b]Mermaid Form 1 ([/b][i]Extras:[/i] ???, ???, [i]Flaws[/i]: ???, ???, [i]Feats[/i]: Metamorph [i]Drawbacks[/i]: ???, ???[b])[/b] [2PP] (Mermaid Form)


[b][u]Drawbacks[/u]:[/b] (-4) + (-0) = -4PP


[b]Involuntary Transformation (Submerged in Salt Water[/b] [i]Frequency[/i]: Uncommon; [i]Intensity[/i]: Major[b])[/b] [-4PP]


[b][u]DC Block[/u][/b]

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Totals: Abilities (12) + Combat (22) + Saving Throws (16) + Skills (11) + Feats (12) + Powers (20) - Drawbacks (4) = 89/105 Power Points

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