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Inpsired by Serris, I've decided to post my Shadow Academy character for so much needed peer editing. Anything you can suggest is welcome.

Player Name: Rei

Character Name: Querl, Theodore “Ted†Dorian (Earth Name)

Character Alias: Azerex, Dark Star, Fallen Knight

GM's Name:

Age: Teenager under Lor Age cycle

Height: 5'6

Weight: 120lbs

Hair: White

Eyes: Deep Blue

Power Level: 10 (149/150)

Unspent PPs: 1

Ability Scores 14PP

Strength: 10 /20 (+5)

Dexterity: 10/20 (+0/5)

Constitution: 10/20 (+5)

Intelligence: 14 (+2)

Wisdom: 20 (+5)

Charisma: 10 (+0)

Saves 9PP

Toughness: 5/12 (+5 con, 7 force field) [impervious 7]

Fortitude: 8 (+5 Con, 3)

Reflex: 8 (+5 Dex, 3)

Willpower: 8 (+5 Wis, +3)

Combat 16PP

Attack Bonus: +8

Grapple: +13

Defence Bonus: 18 (10 flat footed)

Knockback: -2/-9 ( with Protection)

Initiative: +5

Skills 6 Ranks=26 PP

Bluff 8, Intimidate 10 [Forceful Intimidation], Knowledge: Pop Culture 3 (+5), Notice 3 (+8)

Feats 21PP

All Out Attack, Challenge (Forceful Intimidation), Fearless, Doge Focus (8), Jack of All Trades, Motor Pool 6 (10EP limited to Vehicles), Power Attack, Precise Shot, Uncanny Doge (Mental),

Equipment

Dark Star Experimental Ship [60EP/6PP with Motor Pool]

• Gargantuan Size

• Strength: 30 (+10)

• Defence -2, Toughness 12

Features: Alarm 2 (30 Disable Device check), Navigation System 2 (+10 to all navigation related checks), Remote Control

Overdrive (Array) (all powers have Cosmic descriptors; PFs: 3 Alternate Powers) [33PP]

Base Power: Blast 10 (Extras: Autofire) [30PP]

•AP: Beam Up Me... (Scotty) (Teleport 8) (Extras: Range 2 (Perception), PF: Progression 3 (1,000 lbs. Mass) –linked- Super-Senses 3 (accurate communication link)

•AP: Jump to Lightspeed (Teleport 20) (Flaws: Long-Range, Uncontrollable

•AP: Clocking Device (Invisibility 4)

Flight 8 [16PP]

•AP: Space Travel 12 [1PP]

Powers 89PP:

Lor Shock Trooper Physiology (Container) (32 PP)

Enhanced Strength 10

•AP: Sonic Scream (Sonic control 10) (PFs: Accurate (+2), Flaws: Mute on failed side effect roll, DB: Power lose when unable to speak)

Enhanced Constitution 10

Enhanced Dexterity 10

•AP: Triple Jointed (Insubstantial [Fluid] –linked- Snare 5 (Extras: Engulf, Flaws: Distracting)

Shadow Band (Device 14; hard to lose; [70PP]) (57PP)

AP: Bag Pack (Gadget 6; hard to lose; [30PP] (1PP)

Darkness (Control Array) (all powers have Cosmic and Darkness descriptors; PFs: 4 Alternate Powers) [28PP]

Base Power: Darkness control 12 [24PP]

•AP: Black Star (Blast 12) [1PP]

•AP: Reaper (Blast 12) (extras: Vampric, flaws: Unreliable [5/day]) [1PP]

•AP Chilling Touch (Blast 5) (Extras: Secondary attract, Fort save, Poison, Drawback: Noticeable (black)) [1PP]

•AP: Heart of Darkness (Enhanced Strength 10) [1PP]

One-way Translator (Comprehend Languages 1) (Languages- Understand All) [2 PP]

Flight 8 [16 PP]

AP: Space Travel 16 [1PP]

Immunity 9 (Life Support) [9PP]

Protection 7 (Extras: Impervious 7) [14PP]

Drawback:

Normal ID (-4)

Minor (very common): You get the job done, but barely. You’re at –2 whenever you Take 10 or 20, meaning you Take 8 or Take 18, respectively. (-2)

Total Cost:

Abilities 14 + Skills 6 (24 ranks) + Feats 21 + Powers 89 + Combat 16 + 9 Saves – Drawbacks 6 = 159 / 150

DC Block:

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