character edits Character Edits 2022

[Tiffany Korta]

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[MoonSimply]

La Puma Negra:

 

Never mind, I don't have my PP yet from last month yet.

Edited February 11 by MoonSimply

[RocketLord]

Doktor'd!

 

Ghost

 

Please update Ghost's picture to this:

And the costume description to this:

 

The friendly neighborhood Ghost wears a light grey and white costume with thick black accents. The costume is mainly light grey, with white boots and gloves, separated from the rest of the costume with thick black lines. The middle of his chest and lower body is white, separated from the light grey with the same thick black lines, which also show the difference between pants and shirt. Thick black lines stretch from just under his chest, under his arms and connecting on his back. He wears a white mask that covers his entire face, leaving just his eyes visible. Casper wears a pair of x-ray goggles with light blue glass that seems to glow over his eyes. While they seem to be built into the costume, each lens can be moved and placed separately. His logo is a stylized light blue ghost that almost seems to be glow, placed directly in the middle of his chest. Offensive use of Ghost's powers tend to create a chaotic light blue energy effect .

 

Thank you.

[Spacefurry]

Doktor'd!

 

Alrighty, updating Paper to PL11 built PL9. I think I got all the math and ranks right. The I think the only section of crunch unchanged is skills, so here’s what I have for updating.

 

ABILITIES 2 + 10 + 8 + 6 + 4 + 6 = 36PP
Strength: 12 (+1)
Dexterity: 20 (+5)
Constitution: 18 (+4)
Intelligence: 16 (+3)
Wisdom: 14 (+2)
Charisma: 16 (+3)


COMBAT 12 + 12 = 24PP
Initiative: +9 (+5, +4 Improved Initiative)
Attack: +6, +10 with Paper
Defense: +9 (+6 Base, +3 Dodge Focus), +3 Flat-FootedUncanny Dodge

Grapple: +7 (+6 Melee Attack, +1 Strength), +20 Paper Control, +26 vs Paper
Knockback Resistance: 4/2


SAVING THROWS 4 + 4 + 7 = 15PP
Toughness: +9 (+4 Con, +5 Force Field)
Fortitude: +8 (+4 Con, +4PP)
Reflex: +9 (+5 Dex, +4PP)Evasion 2
Will: +9 (+2 Wis, +7PP)
 

 

SKILLS 108R = 27PP
Acrobatics 6 (+10)Skill Mastery

Bluff 7 (+10)Taunt

Climb 9 (+10)

Computers 7 (+10)

Concentration 8 (+10)

Disable Device 7 (+10)

Escape Artist 9 (+13)Ultimate Skill

Gather Information 7 (+10)

Knowledge (Pop Culture) 7 (+10)

Knowledge (Streetwise) 7 (+10)

Knowledge (Technology) 7 (+10)

Notice 8 (+10)Skill Mastery

Search 7 (+10)

Sleight of Hand 6 (+10)Skill Mastery

Stealth 6 (+10)Skill Mastery

 

FEATS 14PP

Dodge Focus 3

Evasion 2

Improved Initiative

Luck 3

Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Notice, Sleight of Hand, Stealth)

Taunt

Ultimate Skill (Escape Artist)

Uncanny Dodge 2 (Sense Types: Auditory, Visual)

 

 

POWERS 57PP (2+2+11+37+5=57)

 

Comprehend 1 (Languages 1 [Read/Write Any]) [2PP] (Descriptors: Mutation, Paper Control)

 

Comprehend 2 (Objects 2 [Speak To; Understand]; Flaws: Limited [Books, Paper, Paper-like objects]) [2PP]

 

Protection 5 (Paper Shield 5; Extras: Impervious 6) [11PP]

 

Paper Control 15 (32PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 5 [37PP] 

Base: Move Object 14 (Move Paper; Lifting Strength: 65, Heavy Load: 100 tons; Extras: Range [Perception]; Flaws: Limited [Paper]; Feats: Accurate 2 [+4 Attack], Precise, Subtle; Drawback: Medium [Paper]) [32PP]

AE: Damage 9 (Paper Strike; Range: 10 90ft Increments, 900ft Max; Extras: Penetrating [5 ranks, Effective Damage 14], Ranged; Feats: Accurate 2 [+4 Attack], Improved Critical 2 [18-20], Indirect 3, Precise, Subtle, Variable Descriptor [Bludgeoning, Piercing, and/or Slashing Damage]; Drawback: Medium [Paper]) [32PP]

AE: Damage 9 (Paper Barrage; Range: 9 10ft Increments, 90ft Max; Extras: Area [General, Cone], Penetrating [5 ranks, Effective Damage 14]; Feats: Accurate 2 [+4 Attack], Improved Critical 2 [18-20], Indirect 3, Selective, Subtle, Variable Descriptor [Bludgeoning, Piercing, and/or Slashing Damage]; Drawback: Medium [Paper]) [32PP]

AE: Damage 9 (Paper Weapons; Extras: Penetrating [5 ranks, Effective Damage 14]; Feats: Accurate 2 [+4 Attack], Improved Critical 2 [18-20], Indirect 3, Precise, Subtle, Variable Descriptor [Bludgeoning, Piercing, and/or Slashing Damage]; Drawback: Medium [Paper]) [24PP]

AE: Create Object 8 (Paper Shape; Range: 800ft; Max Volume: 8 cubes; Toughness: 8; Lifting Strength: 40, Heavy Load: 3 tons; Extras: Duration [Continuous]; Feats: Precise, Progression 2 [25ft cubes], Selective, Stationary, Subtle; Drawback: Medium [Paper]) [29PP]

AE: Snare 9 (Paper Cocoon; Range: 10 90ft Increments, 900ft Max; Feats: Accurate 2 [+4 Attack], Improved Critical 2 [18-20], Indirect 3, Obscures Senses 2 [Sense Types: Auditory, Visual], Reversible, Subtle, Tether; Drawback: Medium [Paper])
[27PP]

 

Super-Senses 5 (Paper Awareness; Descriptor Frequency: Common; Sense Type: Mental, Default Extras: None; Extras: Acute, Radius, Ranged) [5PP] 

 

 

ATTACK                 RANGE       SAVE                     EFFECT

Unarmed                Touch       DC15 Toughness (Staged)  Damage (Physical)

Paper Strike      Ranged      DC25 Toughness (Staged)  Damage (Physical)

Paper Barrage      Area      DC19  Reflex (Staged)  Damage (Physical)
Paper Weapons      Touch      DC25 Toughness (Staged)  Damage (Physical)

Paper Cocoon           Ranged      DC19  Reflex (Staged)     Entangled/Bound

 

 

TOTALS

Abilities (36) + Combat (24) + Saving Throws (15) + Skills (27) + Feats (14) + Powers (57) - Drawbacks (0) = 173/180 Power Points

[KnightDisciple]

Doktor'd!

 

Going to do a "refreshed" sheet down the road, but wanted to do a quick edit for Thoughtspeed right now. 

 

Specifically, I want to spend 2 PP to raise his Speed to 14, and another 2 to raise his Quickness to 14 as well. That'll leave 3PP unspent for now. 

 

So that power block would now be:
 

Kinetic Speed 6.2 (31PP Container [Passive, Permanent]) [31PP] (Mutant, Kinetic Energy)

  Quickness 14 (x50,000) [14PP]
  Speed 14 (250,000 MPH/2,500,000ft per Move Action) [14PP]
  Super-Movement 3 (Water-Walking, Wall-Crawling 2, Flaw: Only While Moving) [3PP]

 

[Dr Archeville]

Done by Mike

 

Artificer has 11pp to spend.  Let’s see what I can do to represent Senior year developments.

 

Trade-Offs: change to “-2 Attack/+2 Effect with Blast, +2 Attack/-2 Effect with Move Object; -1 Defense/+1 Toughness”

 

11pp to spend

 

SKILLS

+3pp

Computers +4r, Disable Device +4r, Knowledge (Arcane Lore) +4r

 

POWERS

 

+4pp to add a new Device

Device 1 (“Winged Sandals,” 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [4PP]

Movement Array 2 (4 points; PF: 1 Alternate Power)  {5}

BE: Flight 2 (25 mph)  {4/4}

AP: Enhanced Swimming 4 (increases Heroditus’ Swimming to Swimming 6 [100 mph]) {4/4}

 

+4pp Magic

Magic 13 (26pp)

Damage 9 (“burst of magical power”; Extra: Area [General, Burst, 45-ft. radius]; PFs: Affects Insubstantial 2, Progression [Area] 2 [225-ft. radius], Variable Descriptor 2 [any elemental/magical]) {24/26}

 

Revamp Device (Mechano-Mystical Components)

Device 1 (“Mechano-Mystical Components,” 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [4PP]

Enhanced Feats 5 (Alternate Power x5 for Heroditus’ Magic [26 points]) {5}

AP: Blast 11 (“bolt of arcane energy”; PFs: Affects Insubstantial 2, Variable Descriptor 2 [any elemental/magical])  {26/26}

AP: Create Object 9 (”Transmute Air to [Stuff & Things]”; up to 9 5-ft. cubes, Lifting STR 45, heavy load 102.4 tons; Extra: Duration [Continuous]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Innate, Precise, Progression [10-ft. cubes], Subtle, Variable Descriptor 2 [any matter])  {24/26}

AP: Environmental Control 3 (Light 2, 25-ft. Radius) {6} and Illusion 9 (“holograms;” visual; PF: Progression 2 [25-ft. radius]) {20}  {6+20=26/26}

AP: Move Object 7 (“mage hand”; Str 35, heavy load 6.4 tons; Extra: Damaging; PFs: Accurate 2 [+11 Attack], Precise, Variable Descriptor [arcane force or shaped matter])  {25/26}

AP: Transform 4 (“Alchemy/Transmutation,” Any Inanimate Object Into Any Other Inanimate Object; Extras: Duration [Continuous, Lasting]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Progression [Mass] 4 [250 lbs.])  {24/26} 

 

And here's what he'll look like with the edits:

 

Spoiler

 

Power Level: 9 (149/151PP)

Unspent Power Points: 2

Trade-Offs: -2 Attack/+2 Effect w/ Blast, +2 Attack/-2 Effect w/ Move Object; -1 Defense/+1 Toughness

 

 

 

ABILITIES: [4 + 2 + 4 + 8 + 6 + 2 = 26PP]

Strength: 14 (+2); effective Lifting STR 24

Dexterity: 12 (+1)

Constitution: 14 (+2)

Intelligence: 18 (+4)

Wisdom: 16 (+3)

Charisma: 12 (+1)

 

COMBAT: [8 + 8 = 16PP]

Initiative: +1

Attack: +4 Melee, +7 Ranged, +11 w/ Move Object

Grapple: +8, +18 w/ Move Object

Defense: +8 (+4 Base, +4 Dodge Focus), +2 Flat-Footed

Knockback: -5, -2 w/out Force Field

 

DC Block:       

ATTACK	RANGE	SAVE	EFFECT
Unarmed	Touch	DC 17 Toughness (Staged)	Damage (Physical)
Bolts of Magic	Ranged (1,100 ft. max)	DC 26 Toughness (Staged)	Damage (Any Magic)
Burst of Magic	45-225 ft.	DC 19 Reflex	Area (Burst) Effect
		DC 24 or 19 Toughness (Staged)	Damage (Any Magic)
Holograms	Perception	DC 19 Will	Disbelieve
Mage Hand	Ranged (700 ft. max)	Grapple vs. +18 (Staged)	Pinned/Bound
		DC 22 Toughness (Staged)	Damage (Physical)
Created Object (Dropped)	Touch	DC 19 Reflex	Avoided
	Touch	DC 24 Damage (Staged)	Damage (Physical)
Created Object (Trap)	Touch	DC 19 Reflex	Trapped inside object

 

SAVING THROWS: [2 + 2 + 3 = 7PP]

Toughness: +10 (+2 Con, +6 Force Field, +2 Protection), +4 w/out Force Field

Fortitude: +6/+4 (+2 Con, +4/+2)

Reflex: +5/+3 (+1 Dex, +4/+2)

Will: +8/+6 (+3 Wis, +5/+3)

 

SKILLS: [76R = 19PP]

Computers 4 (+8)

Concentration 5 (+8)

Craft (Artistic) 7 (+11)

Craft (Chemical) 2 (+6)

Craft (Mechanical) 7 (+11)

Craft (Structural) 7 (+11)

Disable Device 11 (+15)

Investigate 2 (+6)

Knowledge (Arcane Lore) 11 (+15)

Knowledge (Technology) 7 (+11)

Language 2 (Atlantean [native], English, Greek)

Medicine 2 (+5)

Notice 2 (+5)

Search 7 (+11)

 

FEATS: [12PP]

Artificer

Attack Focus (Ranged) 3

Dodge Focus 4

Eidetic Memory

Environmental Adaptation (Aquatic)

Luck 1

Ritualist

 

POWERS: [3 + 8 + 5 + 4 + 4 + 6 + 3 + 26 + 2 + 4 + 4 = 69PP]

 

Atlantean Legs 1 (2 points; PF: Alternate Power) [3PP]

BE: Swimming 2 (5 MPH)  {2/2}

AP: Leaping 1 (x2 [running long jump 24 ft., standing long jump 12 ft., high/vertical jump 6 ft.]) {1} and Speed 1 (10mph) {1}  {1+1=2/2}

 

Device 2 (“Warding Bracers,” 10 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [8PP]

Enhanced Fortitude Save 2 [2]

Enhanced Reflex Save 2 [2]

Enhanced Will Save 2 [2]

Immunity 2 (environmental heat, environmental radiation) [2]

Protection 2 [2]

 

Device 1 (“Arcane Goggles”; 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose; PF: Restricted [must be able to read & understand Atlantean]) [5PP]

Super-Senses 5 (adds Analytical to all Visual senses, Sonar [Ultrasonic Hearing; Default: Acute, Radius, Ranged; Enhancement: Accurate]) {5/5}

 

Device 1 (“Mechano-Mystical Components,” 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [4PP]

Enhanced Feats 5 (Alternate Power x5 for Heroditus’ Magic [26 points]) {5}

AP: Blast 11 (“bolt of arcane energy”; PFs: Affects Insubstantial 2, Variable Descriptor 2 [any magical])  {26/26}

AP: Create Object 9 (”Transmute Air to [Stuff & Things]”; up to 9 5-ft. cubes, Lifting STR 45, heavy load 102.4 tons; Extra: Duration [Continuous]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Innate, Precise, Progression [10-ft. cubes], Subtle, Variable Descriptor 2 [any matter])  {24/26}

AP: Environmental Control 3 (Light 2, 25-ft. Radius) {6} and Illusion 9 (“holograms;” visual; PF: Progression 2 [25-ft. radius]) {20}  {6+20=26/26}

AP: Move Object 7 (“mage hand”; Str 35, heavy load 6.4 tons; Extra: Damaging; PFs: Accurate 2 [+11 Attack], Precise, Variable Descriptor [arcane force or shaped matter])  {25/26}

AP: Transform 4 (“Alchemy/Transmutation,” Any Inanimate Object Into Any Other Inanimate Object; Extras: Duration [Continuous, Lasting]; Flaw: Range [Touch]; PFs: Progression [Mass] 4 [250 lbs.])  {24/26} 

 

Device 1 (“Winged Sandals,” 5 points; Flaw: Hard to Lose) [4PP]

Movement Array 2 (4 points; PF: 1 Alternate Power)  {5}

BE: Flight 2 (25 mph)  {4/4}

AP: Enhanced Swimming 4 (increases Heroditus’ Swimming to Swimming 6 [100 mph]) {4/4}

 

Force Field 6 (“arcane shields”) [6PP]

 

Immunity 3 (cold, drowning, pressure) [3pp]

 

Magic 13 (26pp)

Damage 9 (“burst of magical power”; Extra: Area [General, Burst, 45-ft. radius]; PFs: Affects Insubstantial 2, Progression [Area] 2 [225-ft. radius], Variable Descriptor 2 [any elemental]) {24/26}

 

Quickness 4 (“multitasker,” x25; Flaw: Limited [Mental Tasks Only]) [2PP]

 

Super Senses 4 (Low-Light Vision, Magic Awareness [Descriptor Frequency: Very Common, Sense Type: Visual {Default: Accurate, Acute, Ranged}]) [4PP] 

 

Super-Strength 2 (effective STR 24; lt. load 233 lbs., med. load 466 lbs., hvy. load 700 lbs.) [4PP]

 

DRAWBACKS: 

None

 

TOTALS:

Abilities (26) + Combat (16) + Saving Throws (7) + Skills (19) + Feats (13) + Powers (69) - Drawbacks (0) = 149/151 Power Points  [2 unspent]

 

 

 

Thanks!

 

EDITED to include February post awards (+2pp).  Leaving those untouched, though.

 

[RocketLord]

Doktor'd!

 

Rocket

 

Please update Rocket's appearance description and image to the description below and the two images between the lines:

 

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Jay stands at 5'9'' and weighs 160 lbs, with a slim runner's physique. He has long since given up on trying to tame his blonde hair, which will invariably be a mess after he has moved at super speed, usually appearing slicked back from the wind. Jay prefers shorts and t-shirts, clothes tight enough that they won't restrict him when he's running. He almost always wears running shoes.

 

At Atom Academy, he wears the stand blue, black and white uniform, with blue pants and white boots and gloves with black trim, a white belt with an Atom logo, and blue shirt with black left arm and side, with the tri-colored Atom logo in a white circle on the left side of his chest, divided equally between the blue and black parts of the uniform. On Jay's uniform, the logo have been altered slightly, adding a black rocket between the red, yellow and blue rings of the Atom logo. He wears a pair of pale blue googles that feed him information and acts as a communicator.

 

When acting outside of Atom Academy, Jay tends to wear an orange and yellow suit designed by his uncle Johnny. The orange suit leaves his arms, neck and face bare, but covers the rest, with a yellow line running from his shoulders and down his chest and upper body, before connecting at his waist. He sports a yellow rocket logo on his chest, while he wears specially designed orange running boots with yellow soles and details. He still wears the same pale blue googles.

 

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And please add this to his powers, spending 16 PP.

 

Gadgets 2 (10PP Variable Power, Any Power, Multiple Powers At Once; Extras: Action [Move] Duration [Continuous]; Flaws: Hard-To-Lose) [16PP] (Descriptors: Instant Gadgets, Technology, No Genetic Mutation descriptor)

Sample Allocations: 

Spoiler

Gas Mask w. Air Supply: Immunity 2 (Gas Descriptor) [2PP] + Immunity 2 (Suffocation Effects; Flaws: Limited [1 hour air supply]) [1PP] {3/10PP}
Full Spectrum Goggles: Super Senses 5 (Infravision, Ultravision, Analytical Full Vision, Microscopic Vision 1 [dust-sized]) {5/10PP}
First Aid Kit: Enhanced Trait 1 (Medicine +4) {1/10PP}
Gadgeteer's Tools: Enhanced Trait 2 (Craft [Electronics] +4, Craft [Mechanical] +4) {2/10PP}

Universal Translator: Comprehend 5 (Codes, Languages 4 [Read/Write/Speak/Understand Any/All Simultaneously]) {10/10PP}

Phase Stabilizators: Adds Enhanced Feat 2 (Affects Insubstantial 2) to Rocket Speed Array {2/10PP}

 

[Tiffany Korta]

Doktor'd!

 

The Immutable Betsy Brooks

 

Quick a dirty edit for just 2PP here, I'd like to add 4SP to her sheet.

 

Bluff +5, from 5 to 10 and

Languages +3 adding Mandarin, Japanese and Korean

 

So now her skill should look like

 

Skills: 112R = 28PP
Bluff 6 (+10)
Diplomacy 1 (+5)
Gather Info 11 (+15)
Intimidate 11 (+15) ^{Skill Mastery}
Investigate 9 (+10) ^{Skill Mastery}

Knowledge (Arcane Lore) 9 (+10)

Knowledge (Current Events) 9 (+10)

Knowledge (Popular Culture) 9 (+10)

Knowledge (Streetwise) 9 (+10)
Languages 6 (French, Japanese, Korean, Mandarin, Romanian, Spanish) (Base: English)
Notice 12 (+15) ^{Skill Mastery}
Sense Motive 12 (+15) ^{Skill Mastery}
Stealth 8 (+10)

[Dr Archeville]

So Horrorshow has 9pp unspent.  Let's get him some Feats.

 

Benefit 1 (Access: Danger News Network)

Connected

Move-By Action

Set-Up

Teamwork 3

 

That will leave 2pp unspent.

 

Thanks!