Shadow

"No style is superior all the time, one must choose the style that is superior at the moment. to quote Lee June Fan

Alright then, if you would please put the trade offs at the bottom where the pp total is, you have your first approval!

Alright then, if you would please put the trade offs at the bottom where the pp total is, you have your first approval!

Alright then, if you would please put the trade offs at the bottom where the pp total is, you have your first approval!

This what I have found..... Abilities: 38 Combat: 20 Saves: 22 Skills: 8 Feats: 6 Powers: 10, 56 = 66 Device – 8, 18, 10, 10, 3, 11 = 60 [out of 70] Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Toughness 14 – PL 10, 14 is too high 2] Device 14? What is the device? 3] Why did he go back to the freedom league and what were they supposed to help him out with?

This what I have found..... Abilities: 38 Combat: 20 Saves: 22 Skills: 8 Feats: 6 Powers: 10, 56 = 66 Device – 8, 18, 10, 10, 3, 11 = 60 [out of 70] Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Toughness 14 – PL 10, 14 is too high 2] Device 14? What is the device? 3] Why did he go back to the freedom league and what were they supposed to help him out with?

This what I have found..... Abilities: 38 Combat: 20 Saves: 22 Skills: 8 Feats: 6 Powers: 10, 56 = 66 Device – 8, 18, 10, 10, 3, 11 = 60 [out of 70] Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Toughness 14 – PL 10, 14 is too high 2] Device 14? What is the device? 3] Why did he go back to the freedom league and what were they supposed to help him out with?

:twisted: mwuahahah we shall see, we shall see..... :lol:

:twisted: mwuahahah we shall see, we shall see..... :lol:

:twisted: mwuahahah we shall see, we shall see..... :lol:

re-count.... Abilities: 32 Combat: 8 Saves: 15 Skills: 12 Feats: 7 Powers: 71, 2, 1, 2 = 76 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Does she speak English? I counted 49 ranks until I thought that one of those languages might be your native tougne. 2] Your AF rank should be 14 to get 70 points. -AF: 1- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 40, 3, 5, 5, 10, 1 = 64 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [70]- 69 -AF: 3- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 10, 15, 5, 10, 5, 7, 2, 1, 2, 7= 64 Drawbacks: -total: [70]- 69

re-count.... Abilities: 32 Combat: 8 Saves: 15 Skills: 12 Feats: 7 Powers: 71, 2, 1, 2 = 76 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Does she speak English? I counted 49 ranks until I thought that one of those languages might be your native tougne. 2] Your AF rank should be 14 to get 70 points. -AF: 1- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 40, 3, 5, 5, 10, 1 = 64 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [70]- 69 -AF: 3- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 10, 15, 5, 10, 5, 7, 2, 1, 2, 7= 64 Drawbacks: -total: [70]- 69

re-count.... Abilities: 32 Combat: 8 Saves: 15 Skills: 12 Feats: 7 Powers: 71, 2, 1, 2 = 76 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 150 1] Does she speak English? I counted 49 ranks until I thought that one of those languages might be your native tougne. 2] Your AF rank should be 14 to get 70 points. -AF: 1- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 40, 3, 5, 5, 10, 1 = 64 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [70]- 69 -AF: 3- Abilities: 0 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 0 Feats: 5 Powers: 10, 15, 5, 10, 5, 7, 2, 1, 2, 7= 64 Drawbacks: -total: [70]- 69

Don't feel bad about the way you want to build powers. Characters with one power can be a lot of fun if done right. Also, alternate powers don't have to be a complete different power. [like blast] You could have two PC's with blast and each have th alternate powers but they have gone completely different paths. like this.... 1] Blast: optic force [AP] 2] Blast: optic force [AP] As for the number of alternate powers, I think for now it is accessed case by case. If we feel that someone is flat out abusing the build we will not allow it. Also if you have many AP's on one power, even when dynamic, you only have one group of points to distibute amongst your various powers and can weaken the each power as a whole. AP's are a apart of the build process and can make wonderful characters. Bottom line if your build has no need for AP's then don't waste time with them

Don't feel bad about the way you want to build powers. Characters with one power can be a lot of fun if done right. Also, alternate powers don't have to be a complete different power. [like blast] You could have two PC's with blast and each have th alternate powers but they have gone completely different paths. like this.... 1] Blast: optic force [AP] 2] Blast: optic force [AP] As for the number of alternate powers, I think for now it is accessed case by case. If we feel that someone is flat out abusing the build we will not allow it. Also if you have many AP's on one power, even when dynamic, you only have one group of points to distibute amongst your various powers and can weaken the each power as a whole. AP's are a apart of the build process and can make wonderful characters. Bottom line if your build has no need for AP's then don't waste time with them

Don't feel bad about the way you want to build powers. Characters with one power can be a lot of fun if done right. Also, alternate powers don't have to be a complete different power. [like blast] You could have two PC's with blast and each have th alternate powers but they have gone completely different paths. like this.... 1] Blast: optic force [AP] 2] Blast: optic force [AP] As for the number of alternate powers, I think for now it is accessed case by case. If we feel that someone is flat out abusing the build we will not allow it. Also if you have many AP's on one power, even when dynamic, you only have one group of points to distibute amongst your various powers and can weaken the each power as a whole. AP's are a apart of the build process and can make wonderful characters. Bottom line if your build has no need for AP's then don't waste time with them

Do we still need a second Ref to look this one over? If so I will get to it this weekend.

Do we still need a second Ref to look this one over? If so I will get to it this weekend.

Do we still need a second Ref to look this one over? If so I will get to it this weekend.

This is what I have found.............. Abilities: 16 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 12 Feats: 5 Powers: 113 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 146 1] Dimensional travel isn’t a normal feat. So it doesn’t count in that area. 2] She fell asleep and gained powers? How did she actually get the powers? 3] After she gained powers she didn’t need sleep, but yet she had “haunting†dreams? 4] The door opened before knocking hard [by itself?] and she ducked her head [why? Did something fly at her] -AF: 1- Abilities: 16 Combat: 16 Saves: 6 Skills: 0 Feats: 3 Powers: 43, 10, 12, 1 = 66 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [110]-107 -AF: 2- Abilities: 16 Combat: 12 Saves: 9 Skills: 0 Feats: 1 Powers: 15, 4, 18, 15, 4, 1 = 57 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 95 1] Cacophony (Audio Illusion) 2/Rank Rank=2 Points=2 [This should be 4 not 2] 2] Confuse in the UP book is 1 per rank, then you have a +1 [making 2 per rank] so it should be 12 points not 18. -AF: 3- Abilities: 16 Combat: 20 Saves: 3 Skills: 0 Feats: 2 Powers: 21, 10, 20, 5, 6, 1, 2, 5, = 70 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 111

This is what I have found.............. Abilities: 16 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 12 Feats: 5 Powers: 113 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 146 1] Dimensional travel isn’t a normal feat. So it doesn’t count in that area. 2] She fell asleep and gained powers? How did she actually get the powers? 3] After she gained powers she didn’t need sleep, but yet she had “haunting†dreams? 4] The door opened before knocking hard [by itself?] and she ducked her head [why? Did something fly at her] -AF: 1- Abilities: 16 Combat: 16 Saves: 6 Skills: 0 Feats: 3 Powers: 43, 10, 12, 1 = 66 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [110]-107 -AF: 2- Abilities: 16 Combat: 12 Saves: 9 Skills: 0 Feats: 1 Powers: 15, 4, 18, 15, 4, 1 = 57 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 95 1] Cacophony (Audio Illusion) 2/Rank Rank=2 Points=2 [This should be 4 not 2] 2] Confuse in the UP book is 1 per rank, then you have a +1 [making 2 per rank] so it should be 12 points not 18. -AF: 3- Abilities: 16 Combat: 20 Saves: 3 Skills: 0 Feats: 2 Powers: 21, 10, 20, 5, 6, 1, 2, 5, = 70 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 111

This is what I have found.............. Abilities: 16 Combat: 0 Saves: 0 Skills: 12 Feats: 5 Powers: 113 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [150]- 146 1] Dimensional travel isn’t a normal feat. So it doesn’t count in that area. 2] She fell asleep and gained powers? How did she actually get the powers? 3] After she gained powers she didn’t need sleep, but yet she had “haunting†dreams? 4] The door opened before knocking hard [by itself?] and she ducked her head [why? Did something fly at her] -AF: 1- Abilities: 16 Combat: 16 Saves: 6 Skills: 0 Feats: 3 Powers: 43, 10, 12, 1 = 66 Drawbacks: 0 -total: [110]-107 -AF: 2- Abilities: 16 Combat: 12 Saves: 9 Skills: 0 Feats: 1 Powers: 15, 4, 18, 15, 4, 1 = 57 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 95 1] Cacophony (Audio Illusion) 2/Rank Rank=2 Points=2 [This should be 4 not 2] 2] Confuse in the UP book is 1 per rank, then you have a +1 [making 2 per rank] so it should be 12 points not 18. -AF: 3- Abilities: 16 Combat: 20 Saves: 3 Skills: 0 Feats: 2 Powers: 21, 10, 20, 5, 6, 1, 2, 5, = 70 Drawbacks: -total: [110]- 111

I have not read the backstory yet. [but I will] Here is what I found..... 1] I would say that the minions they way you are describing them should be the connected feat instead. You can say that you have this task force that owes you a favour when your HQ is attacked or the big bad guy hits. [which would save points] 2] That is a lot of wealth. That is a 40 wealth! Why so much? 3] Ok after reading what others have posted and taking another look at your stats, Am I to understand that the 18 str is in the suit and the 4 is just the man? I started at the top and work my way down so I thought you spent 30 points on abilities. We ask players to submit characters in a uniformed way so that the ones of us that review PC’s can glide over the submission with easy. It saves us time so that we can get to other players submission in a timely manor. 4] If I added everything correctly you still have 13 points to spend on the suit. [i counted only 115] 5] It looks like the sword is using only 16 out of 20 points. 6] “Vulnerable (nerve gas: Uncommon, Major, ad hoc ad +1 pt because it bypasses normal Immunity)†What is hoc? I add the drawback at +3 I am not going to look at the minions yet until there is a decision made. Even if the drawback is a -4, I still add things up at 151. [152 if drawback is -3]

I have not read the backstory yet. [but I will] Here is what I found..... 1] I would say that the minions they way you are describing them should be the connected feat instead. You can say that you have this task force that owes you a favour when your HQ is attacked or the big bad guy hits. [which would save points] 2] That is a lot of wealth. That is a 40 wealth! Why so much? 3] Ok after reading what others have posted and taking another look at your stats, Am I to understand that the 18 str is in the suit and the 4 is just the man? I started at the top and work my way down so I thought you spent 30 points on abilities. We ask players to submit characters in a uniformed way so that the ones of us that review PC’s can glide over the submission with easy. It saves us time so that we can get to other players submission in a timely manor. 4] If I added everything correctly you still have 13 points to spend on the suit. [i counted only 115] 5] It looks like the sword is using only 16 out of 20 points. 6] “Vulnerable (nerve gas: Uncommon, Major, ad hoc ad +1 pt because it bypasses normal Immunity)†What is hoc? I add the drawback at +3 I am not going to look at the minions yet until there is a decision made. Even if the drawback is a -4, I still add things up at 151. [152 if drawback is -3]

I have not read the backstory yet. [but I will] Here is what I found..... 1] I would say that the minions they way you are describing them should be the connected feat instead. You can say that you have this task force that owes you a favour when your HQ is attacked or the big bad guy hits. [which would save points] 2] That is a lot of wealth. That is a 40 wealth! Why so much? 3] Ok after reading what others have posted and taking another look at your stats, Am I to understand that the 18 str is in the suit and the 4 is just the man? I started at the top and work my way down so I thought you spent 30 points on abilities. We ask players to submit characters in a uniformed way so that the ones of us that review PC’s can glide over the submission with easy. It saves us time so that we can get to other players submission in a timely manor. 4] If I added everything correctly you still have 13 points to spend on the suit. [i counted only 115] 5] It looks like the sword is using only 16 out of 20 points. 6] “Vulnerable (nerve gas: Uncommon, Major, ad hoc ad +1 pt because it bypasses normal Immunity)†What is hoc? I add the drawback at +3 I am not going to look at the minions yet until there is a decision made. Even if the drawback is a -4, I still add things up at 151. [152 if drawback is -3]