hegemon

think I corrected most of the problems. I took Kinetic Control to represent the limited control of power she has with her TK bolts

Character Sheet Player Name: hegemon Character Name: Krystal Blue Power Level: pl10 150150 pp Trade-Offs: Blast: -2 dam/+2 atk Unspent Power Points: 0 Progress To Bronze Status: 0/30 In Brief: Olympic level TK using martial Artist. She is a mixed of Tim Drake's Robin combined with Buffy the Vampire slayer Residence:Her sister's old two bedroom condo. Alternate Identity: Laney Taylor Identity: Secret Birthplace: Freedom City Occupation: Fan girl, Krystal Blue Log Family: Dr. Kathleen Taylor (Coma) Description: Age: 20 Gender: Female Ethnicity: Caucasian Height: 5'4 Weight:125 Eyes:Blue Hair:Blonde Krystal Blue looks the part of a four color comic. When she is Krystal Blue her attractive 5'4" dancer's figure is surrounded in a blue energy field. Her spandex outfit is a light blue that shimmers from the energy dancing off it. The out fit seems to be designed for both functionality and fashion much like a gymnast performance leotard. Her blond hair flows with blue energy. Finally, her outfit is completed with dark blue domino mask. History: Laney was the youngest of three sisters. Each sister uniquely called to their own path to greatness. Tara, the oldest, was on the fast track to becoming a full detective for FCPD. Kathleen was a brilliant scientist and neurologist. Laney, 8 years younger , was an Olympic class collegiate Gymnast. Tara died while secretly investigating a group called the Doomsday Brigade. The Brigade is a paramilitary race hate group. She gave evidence of the group’s activities to Kathleen in case something happened to her Tara told her sister that she was going to her superiors with the evidence. The next day Tara was shot in the line of duty during what seemed to be a normal traffic stop. Kathleen knew that her sister was murdered because of what she knew. She was not certain if she could trust the authorities because they may have betrayed Tara. Kathleen started working towards a project that would settle the score. A prodigy in the field of Bioengineering she started to develop, and offensive/defensive means for a human to harness their Psi-energy. Kathleen was brilliant, but was not physically impressive like Laney. She knew it was time to include Laney. The trouble was Laney was still in college, and very self-involved. Kathleen finally convinced her sister the importance of what she was doing. Laney did not know exactly what to think. She feared that her sister, Kathleen, had lost her mind in grief. She spoke to a few of her college friends about what was happening. Unknown to Laney one of them was secretly a member of the Doom Brigade. Laney went to speak with Kathleen, but then the labs security devices went off. The Doom Brigade had come to claim the evidence, and stop the experiment. Kathleen strapped Laney into the device that would allow Laney to tap her own Psi-energy. A mass battle erupted between the squad and Laney. Her powers were difficult for her to control, and she triggered an explosion that destroyed the lab and placed her sister, Kathleen into a coma. Note:Dr. Purity and the Doom Brigade(Major Villain): The Doom Brigade is a paramilitary Neo Nazi organization that is focused on the destruction of civil liberties in the United States Their Leader is a battle suit wearing tyrant named Dr. Purity. The Brigade is well connected with right wing political factions and certain businesses. They have been known to use their members as Mercenaries as long as the work is not against their amoral agenda. They are responsible for the death of Police Officer, Tara Taylor, and the injuries which led to Dr. Kathleen Taylor’s coma. Personality & Motivation: Prior to becoming Krystal Blue, Laney was about Shopping, guys, Gossip and collegiate gymnastics. She has left college, and has tried to mature. One of her major flaws is her overconfidence and the thrill that being Krystal Blue drives her forward. Krystal is more four color than most heroes. She has a youthful vibe and hope that should be a large part of her . I think stories that are a contrast to those qualities would be interesting. The idea how does one stay clean in such a dirty world. In many ways, Krystal is a lot like Joss Whedon’s. A girl thrust into a dangerous world without a clue. Powers & Tactics: She has very little knowledge of her powers and their limits. She is a telekinetic that uses the TK to form a blunt glowing blue Aura around her body. Her aura augments her Hand to attacks. Where ever she strikes the blue energy seems to glowed more intensively surging into the strike. She also can throw this TK Bolts which look like Blue Blaster bolts. She is a capable fighter and does well in social situations due to a low level precognition predict power. She is not aware that it even happens, but she has said that most of her actions are from a gut feeling that borders on instinctual. She uses her Gymnastics to and taunt ability to unbalance the individual than uses her gymnastics to cause damage. Krystal is driven by a combo of being a thrill seeker, and the memories of her sisters. Complications and Player Hooks: Secret Identity: Laney was one of the popular girls all her life. Her Latent psi powers have always made her more physically and socially advanced than most in her class There can be only one: Krystal is confused by grief of her Sister's death and her other sister's coma. She wants revenge, but she is no killer. She at times is self destructed because of her thrill seeking is trying to feel the void without her sisters Nemesis: The Doom Brigade view her as a minor threat, but the Brigade always gets revenge. She is unclear still about all the conspiracy, but she knows one day she will face the ones that destroyed her family. Abilities: 4+14+6+2+4+8= 38 PP Strength: 14 (+2) Dexterity: 24 (+7) Constitution: 16 (+3) Intelligence: 12 (+1) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 18 (+4) Combat: 20 + 20 = 40PP Initiative: +7 Attack: +10 Grapple: +12 Defense: +10 (+10 Base, +0 Dodge Focus), +0 Flat-Footed Knock back: -7 Saving Throws: 4 + 8 + 5 = 17PP Toughness: +9(+3 Con +6 ) Fortitude: +7 (+3 Con, +4) Reflex: +15 (+7 Dex, +8) Will: +7, + 11 vs Psionic ( +2 Wis, +5) Skills: 32 ranks 8 PP Acrobatics 10(+17) Bluff 4 (+8) Climb 2 (+4) Computers 3 (+4) Diplomacy 4 (+8) Gather Information 4 (+8) Notice 2 (+3) Sense Motive 4 (+6) Knowledge: Pop Culture 3 (+4) Feats: 14 PP Attractive Acrobatic Bluff Ambidexterity Elusive Target Evasion 2 Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Sense Motive, Bluff, Diplomacy) Move by Attack Precise Shot Luck 3 Uncanny Dodge Set Up Powers 5+12+13=32 PP (All Power have the Psionic Descriptor) Telekinetic Movement Array (4 PP array; Feat: Alternate Power) [5 PP] BP: Flight 2 (25 mph) (4/4 PP) AP: Speed 2 (25mph) Linked with Leaping 2 (5x Jumping Distance 300 ft running jump, 150 ft standing jump, 75 ft High Jump) (4/4 PP) Force Field 6 (Extras:Impervious) (12 PP) Telekinetic Array 6 (12 PP array; Feats: Alternate Power) [13 PP] BP: Blast 4 (Extras: Autofire; Feat: Accurate; Drawbacks: Reduced Range [200' Max]) {12/12PP} AP: Strike 8 (Feats: Mighty) {9/12} Enhanced Save: (+4, Will Limited: Only versus Psionics) {2 PP} DC Box ATTACK RANGE SAVE EFFECT Unarmed Touch 20DC Toughness Damage (Physical) TK Strike Touch 25 DC Toughness Damage (Physical) TK Bolt Range 19 DC Toughness (Autofire) Damage (Physical) Totals: Abilities (38) + Combat (40) + Saving Throws (17) + Skills (9) + Feats (14) + Powers (32) = 150/150 Power Points

I think I have it all corrected. Taking some of the tips of a few chatters and raveled. thks again

did not take reflex bonus, but will correct defensive roll toughness math. I figured the Doom Brigade might change, but not knowing your villain groups well I figured that putting a filler in would be a temporary fix. Until, I spoke with mods. Thank you for your comments

Character Sheet Player Name: hegemon Character Name: Krystal Blue Power Level: pl10 150150 pp Trade-Offs: None Unspent Power Points: 0 Progress To Bronze Status: 0/30 In Brief: Olympic level TK using martial Artist. She is a mixed of Tim Drake's Robin combined with Buffy the Vampire slayer Residence:Her sister's old two bedroom condo. Alternate Identity: Laney Taylor Identity: Secret Birthplace: Freedom City Occupation: Fan girl, Krystal Blue Log Family: Dr. Kathleen Taylor (Coma) Description: Age: 20 Gender: Female Ethnicity: Caucasian Height: 5'4 Weight:125 Eyes:Blue Hair:Blonde Krystal Blue looks the part of a four color comic. When she is Krystal Blue her attractive 5'4" dancer's figure is surrounded in a blue energy field. Her spandex outfit is a light blue that shimmers from the energy dancing off it. The out fit seems to be designed for both functionality and fashion much like a gymnast performance leotard. Her blond hair flows with blue energy. Finally, her outfit is completed with dark blue domino mask. History: Laney was the youngest of three sisters. Each sister uniquely called to their own path to greatness. Tara, the oldest, was on the fast track to becoming a full detective for FCPD. Kathleen was a brilliant scientist and neurologist. Laney, 8 years younger , was an Olympic class collegiate Gymnast. Tara died while secretly investigating a group called the Doomsday Brigade. The Brigade is a paramilitary race hate group. She gave evidence of the group’s activities to Kathleen in case something happened to her Tara told her sister that she was going to her superiors with the evidence. The next day Tara was shot in the line of duty during what seemed to be a normal traffic stop. Kathleen knew that her sister was murdered because of what she knew. She was not certain if she could trust the authorities because they may have betrayed Tara. Kathleen started working towards a project that would settle the score. A prodigy in the field of Bioengineering she started to develop, and offensive/defensive means for a human to harness their Psi-energy. Kathleen was brilliant, but was not physically impressive like Laney. She knew it was time to include Laney. The trouble was Laney was still in college, and very self-involved. Kathleen finally convinced her sister the importance of what she was doing. Laney did not know exactly what to think. She feared that her sister, Kathleen, had lost her mind in grief. She spoke to a few of her college friends about what was happening. Unknown to Laney one of them was secretly a member of the Doom Brigade. Laney went to speak with Kathleen, but then the labs security devices went off. The Doom Brigade had come to claim the evidence, and stop the experiment. Kathleen strapped Laney into the device that would allow Laney to tap her own Psi-energy. A mass battle erupted between the squad and Laney. Her powers were difficult for her to control, and she triggered an explosion that destroyed the lab and placed her sister, Kathleen into a coma. Note:Dr. Purity and the Doom Brigade(Major Villain): The Doom Brigade is a paramilitary Neo Nazi organization that is focused on the destruction of civil liberties in the United States Their Leader is a battle suit wearing tyrant named Dr. Purity. The Brigade is well connected with right wing political factions and certain businesses. They have been known to use their members as Mercenaries as long as the work is not against their amoral agenda. They are responsible for the death of Police Officer, Tara Taylor, and the injuries which led to Dr. Kathleen Taylor’s coma. Personality & Motivation: Prior to becoming Krystal Blue, Laney was about Shopping, guys, Gossip and collegiate gymnastics. She has left college, and has tried to mature. One of her major flaws is her overconfidence and the thrill that being Krystal Blue drives her forward. Krystal is more four color than most heroes. She has a youthful vibe and hope that should be a large part of her . I think stories that are a contrast to those qualities would be interesting. The idea how does one stay clean in such a dirty world. In many ways, Krystal is a lot like Joss Whedon’s. A girl thrust into a dangerous world without a clue. Powers & Tactics: She has very little knowledge of her powers and their limits. She is a telekinetic that uses the TK to form a blunt glowing blue Aura around her body. Her aura augments her Hand to attacks. Where ever she strikes the blue energy seems to glowed more intensively surging into the strike. She also can throw this TK Bolts which look like Blue Blaster bolts. She is a capable fighter and does well in social situations due to a low level precognition predict power. She is not aware that it even happens, but she has said that most of her actions are from a gut feeling that borders on instinctual. She uses her Gymnastics to and taunt ability to unbalance the individual than uses her gymnastics to cause damage. Krystal is driven by a combo of being a thrill seeker, and the memories of her sisters. Complications: Secret Identity: Laney was one of the popular girls all her life. Her Latent psi powers have always made her more physically and socially advanced than most in her class There can be only one: Krystal is confused by grief of her Sister's death and her other sister's coma. She wants revenge, but she is no killer. She at times is self destructed because of her thrill seeking is trying to feel the void without her sisters Nemesis: The Doom Brigade view her as a minor threat, but the Brigade always gets revenge. She is unclear still about all the conspiracy, but she knows one day she will face the ones that destroyed her family. Abilities: 3 + 7 + 3 + 2 + 4 + 8 = 41 PP Strength: 16 (+3) Dexterity: 25 (+7) Constitution: 16 (+3) Intelligence: 12 (+1) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 18 (+4) Combat: 20 + 20 = 38PP Initiative: +7 Attack: +9 Melee, +9 Ranged Grapple: +12 Defense: +10 (+10 Base, +0 Dodge Focus), +0 Flat-Footed Knock back: -8 Saving Throws: 4 + 8 + 5 = 17PP Toughness: +9(+3 Con +6 ) Fortitude: +7 (+2 Con, +5) Reflex: +15 (+7 Dex, +8) Will: +7 (+3 Wis, +4) Skills: 8PP Acrobatics 6 (13) Bluff 4 (8) Climb 2 (5) Computers 3 (4) Concentration (2) Diplomacy 4 (8) Disguise (4) Gather Information 4 (8) Escape Artist (7) Handle Animal (4) Intimidation 4 Notice 2 (4) Search (1) Sense Motive 4 (6) Survival (2) Stealth (7) Swim (3) Knowledge: Pop Culture 3 (4) Feats: 15 PP Attractive Acrobatic Bluff Ambidexterity Elusive Target Evasion 2 Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Sense Motive, Bluff, Diplomacy) Uncanny Dodge 2 Move by Attack Precise Shot Instant Up Luck 3 Powers = All Powers are Psionic and Psychic Based TK Flight 3 = 440 ft per round. 50 mph Speed 2 = 220 per round. 25 mph Danger Sense 1 (vision sense) Force Field 6= Impervious +6 Toughness Strike 7 = Mighty, Thrown 2, 100ft, 20 increments, 25dc PP Cost = 6+2+1+12+10=31